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Just the Six of Us Ch. 11

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by mike250104/02/15

....agree with another poster, way awesome to have sex with your twin, and greedily awaiting to reread Beths turn :)

...but as I mentioned last chapter, wondering if it was a slip, his twin may have been a virgin but she didn't have a hymen like it played out in this chapter. Shes already had a scene where she was pounding herself with three or four fingers, so there was certainly no hymen! Editors missed that one, heh. ...but by the time they got to editing this chapter the previous ones were already posted. Still great :)

Two for one! Give the poor fool ten minutes and hes good to go for another round! ;)

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by rezakhezri04/25/15

Wonderful & Amazing

I don't know if it any means to you after years of writing this, but anyway I'm just wanted to tell you that I'm really enjoying reading it. I'm also aware of that you somehow presented your story to your brave soldiers in Iraq & Afghanistan. Maybe it's a good thing, maybe not, or even maybe disgusts you to know I was a Persian soldier who spent two and a half years in Iraqi prisons as a POW during the Iran-Iraq war. And I know what a horrible, god forsaken land is there. Besides, your soldiers were free and volunteers and had access to internet and other communication ways, but we even couldn't have any pictures of our beloved ones or exchange any letters with them. Even our very existence were unknown to them.

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by Rapier87505/17/15

Awesome !

Just totally awesome ! Well worth waiting for, this chapter. Can it get any better, I will read on with great expectations !

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by PrinceLuke12/01/15

Wow

Just perfect .

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by denbi12/14/16

Excellently conceived and intelligently written.

Beautiful story, written with care; compassion; empathy and humour. Well worth ten golden Stars for every chapter. Love it!
'THE VOICE' Is a wonderfully surreal and I must admit a little schizoid device, which teases, irritates and drives the main character and really amuses and titillates the readers. I have not checked to see if you are still writing, I sincerely hope you are, as you have a brilliant talent. Please keep up the good work.
Fiinally. WTF did anonymous mean By: 'Disabled toilet. ' All the best, Den

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