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Wrong Category
You should probably move this story to NonConsent/Reluctance, Lesbian , Fetish or Mind control. I read interracial stories on this site all the time any this one really annoyed me. You're a good writer but you'll get more appreciation in another category.
Great story
I enjoyed it,left me wanting more.
Maid in love
Good start, hope they'll a long life together... Thanks
Wrong words.
You use halcyon suburbia, Suburbia may be pretentious, oe twee, or many other things but never Halcyon
Likewise Deference, it means exactly the reverse of what you intend, they Defer to you, set aside their desires to please you, I dont know what word you were seeking but these mistakes do jar nd will spoil your stories if you dont take more care.
However its still 5 star as far as I am concerned
An excellent fantasy
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