by Sliver02
Obviously so young you haven't started school.
Your spelling put me completely off the story and I didn't even bother to finish it. Use a spell checker in future!!!!!!
You really need to work on your writing skills. The grammatical errors are just overwhelming your story. It is a good story, it is just that you are hitting us with an error every other sentence.
This story needs to be re-written! Too many spelling mistakes also forced me to discontinue reading.
Sure got turned on. Dream of dressing for a much older man. Please continue. Just ignore the spelling fanatics.