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A Tantric Weekend in Autumn

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by corndog_09/30/10

You set me up!

The first stanza (breath/depths, then chakras/mantras) seemed to establish a rhyme-form like Dante's Divine Comedy, and I was immediately giddy. No such form developed, however. :(

It is a wonderful piece, and an improvement on a similar one recently (right?), but I can't help but wonder if terza rima might add something remarkable.

Thanks for sharing it.

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