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Well ordred chaotic patterns...
Life seems that way most of the time. Thank you for your story and certainly hope that you will continue to another in the near furture.
Golden rings, a "cymbal" of love, the unbroken circle a metafore for a whole life.
Salvation what a beautiful word!!!
Just a tremendous story and the writing... I wish I could write like that... Thanks for sharing and looking forward to your next story.
Heck of a series
Really enjoyed the eb and flow of this tale.
Ncely done.
Thx.
Good Story
Good but you didn't finish it you have to many loose ends
Well done, maybe
Just loved the story but the end just seemed rushed. Thought it had another chapter at least in it.
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