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The Smurfette Costume

byOneSilky©
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by Anonymous

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by 2275jr10/01/10

being taken at last to one hugh boner to a hugh cumming

brilliant story silky your tallent is unending. awesome writing an exciting. but also hot horny ending,

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by ILienBagby10/01/10

As the previous

comment to this story said, It is another great story by a talented and wonderful writer.

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by Marcella_Minx10/01/10

I'm not sure I get it to be honest. Not to be nasty. It is well written. I just don't get it lol. Good luck in the contest though, and thank you for contributing.

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by Boxlicker10110/02/10

Different

This was interesting, and certainly different. As I recall, Bad Smurfette was created and sent by the evil magician and Papa Smurf had nothing to do with her, until he magically transformed her into Good Smurfette. I thought the sex could have had a lot more detail, and the ending could have been done better.

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by AlwaysHungry10/04/10

Not very erotic.

It was too strange to be sexy, and the idea that legions of women would be attracted to the tale just didn't seem plausible.

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by Amitdankevin10/08/10

That was a different story, kinda weird. I liked it but, you did not go in much detail anywhere. Well, Good Luck for contest.

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by Anonymous10/13/10

Actually quite smurfin' funny

Ya know what? Variety is the spice of life, you took a chance with an interesting, and quite...original piece of work. Maybe it wasn't some peoples' cup of tea, but this is Literotica, and, in my opinion, anything goes. So good luck and thanks for a risky and cute story

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by lovebobby10/14/13

hilarious

I absolutely loved it silky you've done it again

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