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That Time of the Month

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by Boxlicker10110/03/10

Scary

This was scary but good. I looked at the length of the story and read the last line. I was glad it wasn't Bianca being devoured.

I have to wonder, though, why he had to be so scrupously honest. I don't believe there would have been any reason for him to refrain from lying.

I thought about the original wolfman. In order to avoid hurting anybody, he sometimes had himself locked up just before the transformation.

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by AlwaysHungry10/03/10

Nice work.

The title is very clever, and the writing a cut above the usual Literotica fare. I know that the fate of Bianca was intended to be ambiguous until the very end, but I found it a bit confusing. I had to re-read the ending to verify that Bianca didn't end up as dinner.

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by OneSilky10/05/10

Excellent

This uses words I had to look up, and uses them correctly; I'm impressed. I liked the way it fit together.

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by Amitdankevin10/08/10

That was a weird story, but I liked it. It was a nice plot. Well, I would still like to know what happened to Bianca.

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I really liked the explanation of the moon/monthly cycle as the reasoning behind his prey. I'm glad he didn't gobble up the "classy" girl, just gave her a good, hard rutting. He gave her what she was looking for.

~Luna

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by optimizer88810/11/10

Thanks for the comments!

I made some minor edits to address the entirely legitimate concerns about clarity.

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