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Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 24

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by bruce2210/05/10

RpSuch is leading the dance

This is delightful analogy between human relations and learning to dance.
Great Work!

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by Anonymous01/07/13

Very good story with a tiny factual flaw

The man never* leads with his left. Left hand (up) is to indicate a solo turn by the lady and right hand for open (promenade) and closed position. A joined turn would be when the man steps back into a turn: he knows what he wants, so he does so while stepping back and the lady stepping forward.
*) ok, yeah there are exemptions (rumba/cha-cha-cha hockeystick etc), but this is true for 90% of all non-latin dance moves.

Still a solid 5 for this story.

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by Anonymous08/11/13

Facts schmacts, Flaws smaws. 5 stars

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