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All Comments on 'AJ Meets Little Red Riding Hood'

by justboycrazy

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AmitdankevinAmitdankevinover 13 years ago

That was a nice story. I liked it. Keep on writing. And, good luck for contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Ehh

Good start but you need to be more descriptive and lengthen out the scenes a bit. This needs a lot of work.

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