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Temptation's Kiss Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/06/10

TEASE!

Ugh! I love this story! But your chapters are too short! It's driving me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But please keep it coming FAST!!

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by VisualPerv01/22/14

Good job!

Good job cleaning up most (if not all) the silly little errors that plagued your earlier chapters.

So far I like this light, sweet little story.

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by SouthernGirl3005/18/14

Good story, but the grammatical errors drive me nuts.

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