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Brother to Sister

byIrishMuffin©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/06/10

total crap

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by Anonymous10/06/10

I thought it was good.....

Unlike the previous comment, I didn't think it was crap. In fact, I enjoyed it a lot!!

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by Anonymous10/06/10

Implausible and dull

No matter how identical twins might be, parents can tell them apart. And these weren't identical twins. And the father never got wise to the switch either? Really?

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by t_i_n_a10/07/10

a couple of thoughts

this has real potential. my thoughts were about a sense of believability. to exist as the other gender for years, to start to look like the other gender, etc. is just a bit too much fantasy. Regardless, I love the idea behind the story!

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by Pepperpuppy10/07/10

My take on your story.

I read the story through to the finish, even though it was somewhat predictable.

BUT the whole concept is just to incredible to believe.

Keep trying though, it wasn't a "bad" effort

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by Scorpio4410/07/10

Workability free zone

I enjoyed the story although the workability factor was way too low to be probable. Hiding gender from a mom is nearly impossible and the son dressing as a daughter would never inspire breast growth.
Keep writing. A rewrite of this story would need to be a major rewrite, IMHO.

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by Hendrixiea10/08/10

intresting

I wonder if Mom knew about the son, but did not Dad about it as a last punishment to him and was bitter and clever enough to get the son on female hormones made to look like daily supliments. And if Dad did the same to Daughter with male ones. Because unless the kids both went to a blind as a bat and senile doctor they would have been found out.

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by CDstorylover02/16/12

fuckin brilliant do do you have anymore stories like this

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by Anonymous04/11/14

Weird

Nice but awkward

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by Anonymous05/09/14

another chapter please

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by Anonymous07/01/14

awsome

don't fight it like most people say some things are meant too be ,its not like it was planned .but it happened for a reason .enyjoy what the both of you have and take special care of each other ... good luck

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