All Comments on 'Halloween Noir'

Well written, erotic and definatly differant. 10+

As far as your statement about doing anything we readers want for a good vote I first had to check if it was going to be from a male or female point of view. Since you are a male how about you fuck my wife while I watch? Yes she's in real life very beautiful:) Anyways I'd still vote a 10 for your story even without the do anything part. Good Luck

damn boy, you're selling yourself pretty cheap... first prize is only $150. So what's you're saying is you'll do anything for that? we need to talk...

That was a nice story including some laughs as well. I liked the plot and I also liked the way you narrated it. And, I liked the end very much as well.

And, one thing. When I read the first line, I had second thoughts about reading the story. You should not ask us to vote like that. Anyway, I gave it a good vote because it was nice.

Good luck for contest.

The style of this story was a tongue-in-cheek tribute to one of my favorite authors, Raymond Chandler. I apologize for the plea for votes. I guess it made me seem like too much of a politician.

You succeeded in summoning Chandler's ghost... I'd imagine he'd have approved, and perhaps joined in. Nicely done, a fun read.

but apparently easily aroused. :)

Nice Chandler imitation, sexy, and as someone else said, funny. Made me want to take out the office bottle, polish a glass with a towel, and down a shot or two while watching the neon flash on and off on Sunset Boulevard.

Now I have to check out the other story you mentioned.

P.S.: There's that thing with the knickers again. ;)