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Across the Tracks Ch. 06

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by Anonymous10/06/10

Thank you!!!

I really like this one and was pleasently supprised to see it posted today. It was short but sweet, I hope you find inspiration soon. I'll be looking out for updates.

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by Anonymous10/07/10

More

More , more I want more Love this story. I am so glad that you posted.

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by rwpassion10/13/10

love it

i just love it and can not wait till the next chapters. i grew up around bikers and rough necks all my life i evn have two brothers that are as tough as otis but has a good heart and would do anything for thier family. like i said can not wait till you write more.

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by Anonymous12/18/10

please write more!!

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by sirreadsalot1002/05/11

good scene. I liket that it was sort of unconventional. Usually the good guy goes in terminator style and everything works out perfectly. This encounter seemed more real in that Otis got clocked and JB had to step up to protect Ariel. Good Job.

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