by FeverDreamer
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Your writing style is amazing. Very nicely detailed and you gave me the best mental images yet.
Sure, you could get a super hot girlfriend if you wanted to.
By the way, sweatpants don't need to be drycleaned.
This sucked. Too much about what a swinging dick you are, while at the same time you explain what a fuckup you are.
You spent way too much time talking about you videos and DVD's before getting to story at hand. Further, there was no explaination to why the mother would suddenly drop to her knees and start giving her son a blowjob.
Incest is a Taboo in our culture so there has to be a plausable explaination for a mother to do something like that i.e. blackmail, fear, drunkardness etc.
Maybe on your next attempt you can make the male protagonist more forceful and less geeky and the mother less whorish and more of an unwilling participant. By your third installment you can show how she comes to rationalize her actions and by the fifth how she has devolved into his wanton slut. Just a suggestion.
The only minus point was you spent more on writing about your porn video, and less about fucking your sweet mommys ass. I would have loved it if you had continued to fuck her for the second and third time.
Done so many times before. But damn you brought some heat with yours. Hot Read!!!!!! Thanks for sharing.
I wanna fukin have sex wiv ya I have big sexy boobs waiting for you to rub and u can't forget my soaking wet sexy pussy and someone plz comment if they wanna have sex with me and tell me if first sex hurts taaa xxxx
Damn, I don't know if your story was true or not, but none the less. You are some fuckin lucky man! My mom is a goodie two shoes type of mom and would never do something like that. I am so jealous right now... And horny :P
damn it moms are great.
i'm 30and have been doing
my 60 year old mom for years.
whenever i go over there she greets
me nude and we fuck like crazy.
i love falling asleep with my cock in her
ass after cumming.
oh god even i just love anal sex with my mom but i never go to sexual intercourse me and mom keep it within the limits of anal and oral sex lots of oral sex
one of my favorite incidents in my life was getting to get down and dirty with my mom...she caught me while i was masturbating in the shower she told me to dry myself and come out and when i came out she told me to sit down and then she put her hand on my cock and squeezed it...she then asked me to bang her like i have never banged before so i stroked her legs and squeezed her boobs and pinched her nipples then after i kissed her we did oral sex in 69 even after shooting my load in her mouth i was not done i was still hungry for her pussy and ass so she sat on my face while i put my tongue in her asshole after 30 minutes she got up and a slapped her a big fat ass a few times before squeezing it then i told her i slid my dick into her pussy i pulled her hair while banging her i pulled my dick out and started probing her asshole with it then i started banging her asshole so hard she was moaning and biting her hand at the same time i smacked her ass and abused her while i did this and finally i blasted another load in her butt after that he made her lie down on me and i started to lick some sweat of her tits her asscheeks and her back then after smacking my dick on her face and making her give me a foot job we went into the shower where i soaped her up and she gave me a handjob and i ejaculated on her face
The story premise was good, as was the idea. But as someone earlier said, you spent a lot of time describing your DVD collection and watching porn on the computer and masturbating. Then you say you could have any 'hot' girl you wanted. Well .... reality is different and if you want the readers to enjoy the story, you need to be a bit more realistic. We all know, as do you, that boys who jack off as much as the main character in the story do not get hot girls. For that matter, they tend not to get any girls.
Now the writing was better than I expected, as was the grammar. But just having the Mom flop down on her knees without more adult-like comments or lead in is bogus. If this is a fantasy, take us along and make us believe the scene and direction. Then improve the sex and make it somewhat sensual, even if the son is getting the upper hand. Don't just write it as wham bam thank you ma'am, now you are mine.
cant criticize you for doing it cuz so many guys end up doing it as for me i only get fuck my moms friends and an occasional handjob and bj from my mom and sometimes squeezing her ass
It could have use more on trail thoughts to me you drifted off abit but it was good
i used to finger my moms ass whenever she was horny i used to lick her ass and fuck it also
I fucked your mom in the ass yesterday and she begged me to cum inside. I told her I had aids and she said that it was ok because she had it to. She told me to just cum and cum again until she was raw and bloody. I've never transferred stds like this before...what a good whore!!!
I have wondered how it would be to fuck my mommy in the ass, but can not bring my self to even trying. You see my mommy is a Scottish immigrant who was never touched by anyone except my daddy. A true lady always dress proper with never a foul word out of her mouth. Five feet two inches tall, 140 pounds, a little bit chubby around the waist, thick thighs and round big ass with a 36D Cup breasts. Would anyone here ever consider fucking such a nice lady in the ass or cunt. Love to hear any bad boy or bully comments.
im afraid to fuck my mom cause my brother is always home and step dad has work tuesday, wednesday, saturday, sunday also i don't know if she feels the same as i do and i dont wanna make a move and ruin how close we are let alone i don't want her to tell my step dad, the family or worse her calling the cops
I love my mom and she loved me, but the time came when I needed to fuck her up her ass and turn her into a cum slut whore, turning tricks for me in the street. I did it and took her to Vegas and put her in a sex show, and got her into Lesbian chicks.
always like moms getting ass fucked you almost lost my interest when mom was doing black guys im not against it but i just like to hear about hot moms and sons getting it on i read the interracial section for blacks and hot chicks keep up the awesome writing
You SHOULD FUCK A ASS BEFORE YOU WRITE ABOUT IT. IF YOUR DICK IS BIGGER
THAN YOU R FINGER YOUR GOING TO NEED SOME LUBRICANT. SO DONT MAKE YOUR SELF LOOK LIKE A IDIOT WRITING SOMETHING YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT.
I want to see your mom naked. Man if she looks like the way you described her, we need to see her!
I don't know why but I'm 13 now and I feel like really burnt and I want my mum and I don't know what to do any help?
never got to fucking my mom and I am thankful for that. She was single and we were open people she'd walk around in panties and sometimes even nude. We were used to that. She saw my boner one morning and that same day walked in on me while i was in the shower we showered together and then she gave me a blowjob we got on the bed and lay on her back I rubbed my cock on her ass and came on her back that was all and we did that often we were nude in front of each other most of the time and would always perform oral sex on each other and shower together
Yes, when I was about 15 my 13 year old friend caught my mom coming out of her bath. Waiting for he r to bend over to put onv her girdle he moved behind her and at first worked his huge thick cock into her very tight cunt. Mom did not get it from my dad very much and i never realized how hot she would be with a young cokc penetrating her as from my friend. I would have loved to have fucked my mom's big ass too but I never had much at least no where as his 9 inch and very thick hunk of meat. My mom just moaned and groaned wiggling her big asscheeks as he pudhed in and out from her cunt. Then he just shoved it deep up into her very tight ass assh ole which caused her to yell in pain but suddenly just pushed and twisted as my friend shot pounds of jizz up into her ass canal.
When mommy finally ended in an orgasm she finished slipping into her tight girdle, threw her house dress over her anbd walked so stiff and bole legged out of her room and towards the kitchen to make dad and the rest of us dinner. She never wore pant ies after that event and explains why she spent so much time over at tyhe naval base on Friday evenings looking for young guys or sailors to satisfy her desperate needs.
i know all christan jews and hindus aur mom fucking even they can fuck their grand parents too cary on
Glad she knew how to help her son get more focused on his schoolwork! Thanks for getting me horny and hard with this story!
I also was horny for my mom. One morning I was in bed wanking off when she suddenly walked in on me, She asked what I was doing that I should not do that too often. Then she asked if I had ever had a girl and I said no. She then told me she would help me but I was not to tell anyone. She took off her clothed and got on the bed with me face down. She said for me to put some lube on my cock and put it between her legs just below her pussy and I did. The we fucked with me cuming very fast.
You know this is so wrong... I am only reading this because I have to... You guys are sick
I haven't fucked my Mom up the ass, but I have rimmed her and that was glorious...
This is an example of terrible writing by an unexpierienced virgin!
He spent almost 3/4 of the first page talking bout him i didnt like at all
Kui ma oma ema keppisin siis ema juhtis ise minu riista omale perse ja käskis vaikselt sisse suruda.
I need to get this off of my chest. Im a 47 yr old African American woman and a mother of 3, one boy 2 girls. My oldest and only son is 26, he resides with me. Under extreme discretion, he and I are lovers. Although, we and our family lives in the same state, we are all still hundreds miles apart. It was I who initiated the affair after witnessing my son with his girlfriend at the time, a little over 2 yrs ago. Seeing my son, something unusual hit me. I knew it was wrong, as well as perverted and taboo. It wasn’t until a couple of months after my son broke up with the girl. Im no writer, nor am I really able to go into detail. I can say this, it was I who did the initiation, and however, it didn’t take a whole lot of seducing of my son. Our sex is intense, in pubic we are mother and son, behind closed doors, I have to admit, I am my son’s whore. We share the same bed, my son has an aura that melts me. I would love to share the story, Im no writer.
you are sick and so is your mom if that did happen,i think it is all in you mind
The that wrote your sick well let you know I fucked my mom and aunt and my 2 sisters guess what I got all 4 of them pregnant my mom gave me 3 kids as did my aunt both sisters gave me 5 kids each we all live in same house I ruined my moms and aunts marriages.you can say I have my own incest family I even watch the 4 woman go down on each other after I cum in their cunts get circle lick and suck cum out of each other's cunts
I had a similar experience, when I was 18, and the "older woman" was a 36 year old redhead. This woman was delicious, gorgeous, and built.......and I learned SO much about sex, from her. Some day I'll share the stories.
Have ever thought knocking up your mom I didit to my mom we have three kids together my aunt gave me three too plus my sister on are 5rh child she carrying inside herwhen go to bed same room big orgy for us and I always cum inside different cunt and that persons ass different night
Got my mom and aunt fuck their assholes my aunt screamed out my ass yelled pull it out to big then rammed her hard them shot my sperm in ass did same to my momeven knock up both of them now live together once a month we have my friends over have full gangbang weekend
Great story. Well done. As a small child my mom gave me enemas when I had a stomach ache . Guess I got an anal fixation from that . Lying across her knees in the bathroom. , my cock between; her knees. Sometimes she’d put her fingers inside me and make me squirm . Later as a teenager, she came into my room sometimes when I was sleeping and stick a finger in my ass when she began sucking my young dick. Wish she was still around for me return the favor
It reminded me of my mom's pussy. I love licking her pussy. I watched her being banged by a Guy. Last mother's day I got her fucked by 4 guys over and watched her pussy and Anal destroyed.
It was a good fantasy story. No way would he have lasted as long as he said. Been there done that. About three minutes and blow the load. After the second load. Could go for a couple of hours. Felt like it would fall off.