All Comments on 'Pool Payments Ch. 10'

I guess since she hasn't asked to use the pool, Andrea gets a free ride now. This is definitely a hot chain story. You have to keep going and write sooner. I'm starting to get antsy over here.

No one writes better erotic--actually hotter than all holy hell--sex scenes than does TxTallTales. Add to that the fact that he can also tell a good tale, develop characters, and write with an easy with that is hard to match, and you've got yet another excellent addition to his ever expanding library of feats!

This is just a perverted stroke story,and not very good one at that.

Well deserved 1* !

Band him!

I thought I had read all of your stories. They are very well written and super hot. Then I found this string that I had not read before. Well done sir!!!

In the Pool Payments series this story was by far the best. I have read quite a few of your stories, and many are just straight 5 stars all the way, but this one started with 3 for me, then went to 4, and now finally to 5 stars. Good job!

Unexpected -- in order not to say unrealistic -- points:

1) a husband who would ignore a hot young girl like Andrea -- even if he did have someone else on the side (why not have two?).

2) Wife turning hot barely-past-teen chick over to husband without talking it over and without jealousy.

3) (big one) Andrea will neither give her husband blow jobs, nor doggie, nor anal; yet with little persuasion she does them all with someone else's husband -- in just one session (as opposed to days or weeks to work up to it) and before it's over is eager to do it. Repressed personalities do not overhaul that quickly.

4) Alex is the Superman of sex. Just like Superman can fly, Alex can go multiple times with multiple ladies during the week, have a roll with his wife on Saturday, and still go multiple times for hours more into the night with his new sex toy. Oh yes, he's got the super-big cock, too and it still goes into the anus of petite women

5+) you can add your own

There is one place where this dream fits perfectly -- in Literotica fantasyland. (Just like Superman fits perfectly in comic book land.)

And then, I suppose that if everything fit nicely in the real world, we Literotica readers would probably not enjoy it so much. So, TTT, help us dream on.

(I hope my submission did not burst someone's bubble so badly as to ruin their nice dream.)

Paul in Oklahoma

I thought that this story didn't really belong in this series. It didn't add anything and just made it into a ordinary smutty story. Otherwise a great series

Good going but just toooooo much arse fucking of a virgin again

Never too much arse fucking LOL. My god great addition

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!