Don't Fear The Reaper

MmmmHmmm

Hilarious..

~gary andrews (garyandrewsbodyguard@yahoo.com)

short but exhilarating. good luck in the contest !

Your spelling is horrible. One word is "builders" not "builder's" A Second word is "Davis" not "Davis's"

The story was interesting, but not very graphic or erotic.

english teachers begone !!!!!

its erotica not the new yorker, if you want to critique someone's writing go elsewhere, i thought this was good, it made me laugh so it worked.

Nice

Should have expanded a bit.
The other guy finds she fucked the other reaper when she says "so you want to go again", then he leaves, you offer solace, and get a proper introduction to this lovely zombie.

fun

A fun little quickie.

Anonymous is right for once!

Anonymous calling me on the spelling was dead on. I'm working on some other stories, and didn't give this one the edit or review I should have - just was inspired to write it from an overheard comment, and quick submitted it to get back to what I should have been working on. Sorry - especially bad to make the mistakes in the first line of the story - that would bother me if I was reading it!

Thanks for the comments, and I'll be more careful in the future.

Spelling...anon...

Actually, I believe it's "the Davis'", to indicate you are talking about "the Davis couple"....just saying.

Curious

Tx Tall Tales,

You wrote Halloween party rivalries so nicely! Hot scene! I'm curious, can you divulge what the over-heard comment was that inspired this little tale?

~Luna

Have I ever mentioned . . .

that TxTallTales is one of the absolute best on this site? Just read the first three paragraphs of this story. My god, if he's not a professional writer, then he sure as hell should be. The rhythm, syntax, character sketches, dialogue, it's all there. I have read everything he's posted here, and I don't even like the themes of most of his stories!

Still, themes are personal to the author, while good writing is universal. And simply put, TxTallTale's writing is just fucking awesome!

Keep up the INCREDIBLE work!

I really enjoy your work. Think you could do a follow up to this - like an after the party connection.

Appreciate all the comments!

Stop Rehnquist - you're making me blush. (And that's REALLY hard to do.)

From the author of the Knox County series (I had to read the first 7 in one LONG sitting - just couldn't stop) and the excellent and well-deserved top ranking Lovin' Wives story Goin' Back Home Again - that's high praise indeed. I love your work as well. Goin' Back Home Again really spoke to the frustrated musician in me.

As for the comment - it was nothing earth shattering, just a guy commenting on a party where 2 people dressed the same and nobody could tell them apart. I swear there's a story idea in almost everything. If only I could type 120 wpm with no errors spelling or grammatically.

So true! I just had a reader challenge me to describe a seasonal dessert. I wrote a 3 page story from the idea. :) Sometimes even typing that fast doesn't help. But, I find my fingers fly faster than my pen. So to keep up with my thoughts, the computer suits my needs best.

Thanks for the explanation :)

~Luna

Well done!

Why the heck didn't I think of this? :) Great job.

A sexy little tale

I really enjoyed this story. It was short and hot, the style fun and a little quirky. Although I'd love to see our narrator get into some more adventures, this was quite a satisfying little tale all by itself. A very stimulating Halloween read.

Oh, sweet !

Super story. Quick & fun, just the job.

HP

I liked it

He was literally a 'fill in'. lol

This is as good as it gets or a short story

This story is a great humorous short. This author flows through this tongue in cheek like an FBI agent as a waiter in a Costra Nostra meeting. The humour is slow yet works up almost passing you then you are left holding a rabbit where a magician once performed. This author is smart crafty and very humorous. Thanks again for a masterpiece that could've been the start of a long series.

Outstanding

Evil, devious, sexy, and outstanding. 5*

Very funny and sexy, too.

At first I thought it was going to be about the Real Grim Reaper making a call at the wrong address and grabbing the wrong guy. This was better.

To the two Anonymous commenters of grammar: it should actually be "the Davis' Halloween party" or, "The Davises threw a Halloween party."

Anyway, I just discovered Tx as an author and am very much enjoying the storytelling and writing :)

FTDS!!!

Where the hell are you when we need you?