All Comments on 'Leading Him Astray Ch. 01'

by CyberFrog

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CyberFrogCyberFrogover 13 years agoAuthor
This is my first...

First ever story submitted, so please leave me feedback as I would love to hear your thoughts and maybe even suggestions for future stories. Thanks for reading and don't forget to vote!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very nice

a very cock hardening read please submit more

Gus AsparGus Asparover 13 years ago
teriffic!

Great story! Let's have chapter 2 soon!

CyberFrogCyberFrogover 13 years agoAuthor
Part 2 is up,

Thankyou for your feedback folks, part 2 is up now and also my Halloween contest entry.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Decent premise.

But sex is too automatic. Too rushed.

Three stars.

Anonymous
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