All Comments on 'Transylvanian Concubine'

by JukeboxEMCSA

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AlwaysHungryAlwaysHungryover 13 years ago
Well done.

You are a talented writer, one of the few I have encountered in this contest that can actually produce good English prose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I rarely read the Erotic Horror category. I don't like blood and gore. You brought back the meaning of "erotic" in lyrical and elegant prose. It is indeed one of the best stories I have read on this site.

I hope you win the contest. You deserve it.

ContrarianContrarianabout 8 years ago
From your mind control stories it is clear you know how to tell a great story, but

This one was amazing.

Really scary, a sexy dark ren field. Wow.

How do you think up these?

FandeborisFandeborisabout 2 years ago

I have been taken on a journey of lust, sexual desire, and depravity.

One of your best ones. Thank you

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous