But I couldn't get past all the unnecessary apostrophes and spelling errors. You may have a decent story line. I couldn't tell because I couldn't stand it past the first few paragraphs. But please, please, find an editor that knows how to spell and punctuate.
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you always gotta end it when its getting really good dont you :( please hurry with the next chapter!!!
I tried twice...
But I couldn't get past all the unnecessary apostrophes and spelling errors. You may have a decent story line. I couldn't tell because I couldn't stand it past the first few paragraphs. But please, please, find an editor that knows how to spell and punctuate.
You got to make more of theese
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