Just wow..I clapped at the end of this chapter, my god you can write. More is all I can say and 25 stars is deserved.
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Anonymous10/11/10
Yesssssssssssssss!!!!
Lovedd ittt but can you please let alexai get cedar pregnant it would just make the story perect for me I absolutely adore the twins pretty pleaseeeeeeeee!!!
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Anonymous10/11/10
WOW!!!!!!!
I am praying that you submit another chapter in the very near future and put us out of our misery. Please update soon :)
I usually see were a story is going, not this time.In the beginning you reminds us of Calebs love and devotion to Annie. That soft side of him that we all love. And then we find out about Calebs knowledge of the ware/vamp mating and his plan to deal w/ it. Never saw it coming!!!!. Now if Andrei would ve acted any differently towards Loretta, I would've been surprise. Amazing, Fantastic, Wonderful, Etc
You my friend amaze me every single chapter. I have checked for this one everyday since you posted on the 8th that you would be submitting it. I am blown away again! I was not expecting this turn of events and it pleased me a great deal more than it probably should:-) I am addicted to your story and one day hope to buy it in book form! I love it so much that I hope you keep writing it for years, taking us through generations of the characters and lives you have so deeply inbedded in my mind and heart. AMAZING
ADDICTED does not even cover it! I love this story. I know this is a series I will be rereading many times over. As others have already stated unpredictability is fantastic. There no such thing as a boring chapter. Please keep up the wonderful work. Thanks for sharing this story and your time.
When she threw up I knew...and my neighbors heard me scream!
MEJ, you are killing me here--I need for this meeting to take place and take place NOW! I need to read about Nors and Alexei's reaction to the fact that they can fully mate AND become fathers.
Imagine, in a little over 2 months Andrei and uncle Alexei will be changing crappy diapers--I AM SO LOVIN' IT!!
I don't need to tell you this was a great chapter but I feel I must--THIS WAS A DAMN GREAT CHAPTER!!!
I know I sound greedy but I'm sure other will back me up--PUHLEASE hurry with the next chapter!
you've put him through the ringer the last couple chapters....
Excellent chapter this is getting exciting....
there was one whooopsie where you used Alexei's name instead of Andrei's....
I have reset the timer on my computer for Chapter 12 :)
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Anonymous10/11/10
Amazing
Absolutely amazing ~ your complex characters and situations make me check every day for new chapters...You keep us so enthralled ~ can't wait for chapter 12!
Leave it to Caleb to fix things. And to think he knew all the long. Another story well done.
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Anonymous10/11/10
Type faster
Are you typing? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Anonymous10/11/10
I love your writing!!
Omg!!!! I can't wait until next week for the next chapter!!! That meeting will be amazing to read!
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Anonymous10/11/10
nice!!
Love the twist in the story... i didn't think Andrei biting Loretta could be so complicated. Now he finds out that his venom will do no harm.I love how you impregnated Loretta, now she can have children and Andrei can learn to be a father. Wow I'll just have to wait until the next chapter to see what happens
-c-
This story gets better and better with every chapter.
Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
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10/11/10
We are not worthy..!!
Wow you certainly know how to get all your Jazettes up in a sweat girl...Loved the pregnancy twist and now cant wait for both the other were/vamp matings to fight over who gets hurt/who does not want to hurt meeting...you just know Cedar and Ashley will want to complete their matings...OMG how will Jared react to this...its just endless the twist and turns there are to this story.
Keep up the great work..cant wait for my next Jaz fix :)
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Anonymous10/11/10
Precedent
I hope you know, you've just managed to set a standard for us to measure everything you ever write against.
Ahhhhhh! So Good. Heart in throat kind of happiness. Blood is pumping. Hands are shaking. Can hardly breathe I'm so excited. So excited can't put proper sentences together. Ahhhhhh! So Good.
Brilliant x 10 x 100 x 1000 x 10000 x 100000 x 1000000 x 10000000 x infinity!
Oh I can't wait for the meeting! And everybody's reaction to the pregnancy! Cant wait for the next chapter..as always you deliver an amazing chapter :)
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Anonymous10/12/10
Awesome!
I seriously crave your stories. Keep them coming please. :)
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Anonymous10/12/10
Brilliant!!!
Good job,thanks u post it.i loovvve all u'r charracter,especially caleb&annie.can't wait next chapter
Gee Whiz Jazz - I honestly never saw the pregnancy thing coming - wooohoooooo - you certainly keep us on our toes these days. One of your best chapters ever. Hugs, Kate
I knew by page one that Loretta's "eggo was preggo" l.o.l. The symptoms sounded too much like a human pregnancy times 10 to be anything other than pregnancy, and since she didn't initially die from the vampire venom it would have been a bit moot for death to suddenly creep up on her now in the guise of the stomach flu. Ya know I think this is the very first time that Andrei actually called Rhianna "Annie". His love and devotion to Loretta is completely adorable. And I know for sure now that they are having a girl... just wonderful another female for Andrei to fuss and make death threats over.
I like the way that Caleb is handling the whole situation but I don't think that Jared will be too enthused with Caleb leaving him in the dark about the knowledge Caleb possesses and the plans Caleb and Demetri have made. And poor Nors... I can already tell that Ashleigh is all but going to harass him day and night until he gives into him biting her. Sounds exciting... now don't forget about the name I picked out for Ashleigh and Nor's future child... Nash-a big red-headed vampire/wolf hybrid could very well grow into a name like Nash and of course Andrei's and Loretta's daughter's name has to be Rose. l.o.l Can't wait for the next chapter.
What a twist!! I loved this one, Andrei putting aside his machoness to ask for Caleb's help - and all for love Ahhhhhhh! Now all we need is more!! MORE!!!!
I'm so loving this series, Jaz!!! I loooooove it! I'm doing a happy dance because Andrei smelled a scent of lilac~ Yay! Is Loretta preggo with a girl?? Take your time, but I'm waiting impatiently. lol
Zee~
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Anonymous10/12/10
awesome, i cannot wait until the next one
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Anonymous10/12/10
OMG
'OMG' totally covers it. HOLY CRAP. this is getting sooo ridiculously awesome :D
This chapter had me screaming my kids thought something was wrong, I did NOT see Caleb knowing about inter-species coming and the pregnancy only when he was talking to Annie. Your writing is sooooooooooo good throwing in her feeling better as soon as she saw her mate was brilliant.
I am sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter.
well caleb is an ancient , so him knowing things does not surprise me, and i still see one hell of a fight coming, not to mention freya running afoul of one of the were's , hope to see more soon
ooooohhh
awwweeeeeeeeesommmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i can't wait to see how this goes. excellent work hon...
Donna
Fan-freaking-tastic!!!!
See above!
Can't wait
This is absolutely the best twist in this story line. I am so addicted to this series! Keep up the good work!
omg omg omg!
We need the next one! I'm on pins n needles!
OMG - I LOVE THIS STORY!!! KEEP GOING JAZ
RIGHT! THAT'S IT!!!
I am becoming your next groupie whether you like it or not, lol!!
Brilliant, brilliant brilliant, I am so glad I checked... I still can't quite believe you are making this up as you go along! Major kudos to you Jaz
F
5 Stars is just not enough
Just wow..I clapped at the end of this chapter, my god you can write. More is all I can say and 25 stars is deserved.
Yesssssssssssssss!!!!
Lovedd ittt but can you please let alexai get cedar pregnant it would just make the story perect for me I absolutely adore the twins pretty pleaseeeeeeeee!!!
WOW!!!!!!!
I am praying that you submit another chapter in the very near future and put us out of our misery. Please update soon :)
Absolutly Amazing
I usually see were a story is going, not this time.In the beginning you reminds us of Calebs love and devotion to Annie. That soft side of him that we all love. And then we find out about Calebs knowledge of the ware/vamp mating and his plan to deal w/ it. Never saw it coming!!!!. Now if Andrei would ve acted any differently towards Loretta, I would've been surprise. Amazing, Fantastic, Wonderful, Etc
Awesome!!!
Such a great chapter! I am absolutely loving this story!
YES!!!!!
You my friend amaze me every single chapter. I have checked for this one everyday since you posted on the 8th that you would be submitting it. I am blown away again! I was not expecting this turn of events and it pleased me a great deal more than it probably should:-) I am addicted to your story and one day hope to buy it in book form! I love it so much that I hope you keep writing it for years, taking us through generations of the characters and lives you have so deeply inbedded in my mind and heart. AMAZING
oh my gosh
pregnant? Oh wow. This story is definately ur best yet. And im loving the new side to andrei...but what on earth will jared say?!
All smiles
This was really good!!! I have to agree with an earlier comment - this is your best story to date that I have read here.
ADDICTED !!!!!!!!!!!
ADDICTED does not even cover it! I love this story. I know this is a series I will be rereading many times over. As others have already stated unpredictability is fantastic. There no such thing as a boring chapter. Please keep up the wonderful work. Thanks for sharing this story and your time.
Screaming now! Wonder Twin powers activated!!
When she threw up I knew...and my neighbors heard me scream!
MEJ, you are killing me here--I need for this meeting to take place and take place NOW! I need to read about Nors and Alexei's reaction to the fact that they can fully mate AND become fathers.
Imagine, in a little over 2 months Andrei and uncle Alexei will be changing crappy diapers--I AM SO LOVIN' IT!!
I don't need to tell you this was a great chapter but I feel I must--THIS WAS A DAMN GREAT CHAPTER!!!
I know I sound greedy but I'm sure other will back me up--PUHLEASE hurry with the next chapter!
kat
Poor Andrei....
you've put him through the ringer the last couple chapters....
Excellent chapter this is getting exciting....
there was one whooopsie where you used Alexei's name instead of Andrei's....
I have reset the timer on my computer for Chapter 12 :)
Amazing
Absolutely amazing ~ your complex characters and situations make me check every day for new chapters...You keep us so enthralled ~ can't wait for chapter 12!
Oh, Yes more
Leave it to Caleb to fix things. And to think he knew all the long. Another story well done.
Type faster
Are you typing? I can't wait for the next chapter.
I love your writing!!
Omg!!!! I can't wait until next week for the next chapter!!! That meeting will be amazing to read!
nice!!
Love the twist in the story... i didn't think Andrei biting Loretta could be so complicated. Now he finds out that his venom will do no harm.I love how you impregnated Loretta, now she can have children and Andrei can learn to be a father. Wow I'll just have to wait until the next chapter to see what happens
-c-
Damn ...
You just keep getting better and better with this story. Now that you have done it you must start posting sooner. I need my fix.
Mike from Texas
Loved It
This story gets better and better with every chapter.
Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
We are not worthy..!!
Wow you certainly know how to get all your Jazettes up in a sweat girl...Loved the pregnancy twist and now cant wait for both the other were/vamp matings to fight over who gets hurt/who does not want to hurt meeting...you just know Cedar and Ashley will want to complete their matings...OMG how will Jared react to this...its just endless the twist and turns there are to this story.
Keep up the great work..cant wait for my next Jaz fix :)
Precedent
I hope you know, you've just managed to set a standard for us to measure everything you ever write against.
Awesome!!
Loved it she says as her speculation comes true! You were right when you sent me this.
I thought I'd be kind to you and give you some little hints for upcoming
chapters.
Chapter 10 - OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 11 - OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 12 - NOOOOOOOO! OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
Chapter 13 - [Can't speak - passed out in complete shock!!!]
Chapter 14 - OMG!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
great
this is not a story, it's a masterpiece
OMG
Ahhhhhh! So Good. Heart in throat kind of happiness. Blood is pumping. Hands are shaking. Can hardly breathe I'm so excited. So excited can't put proper sentences together. Ahhhhhh! So Good.
Brilliant x 10 x 100 x 1000 x 10000 x 100000 x 1000000 x 10000000 x infinity!
Groupie - Z
Nice job, Jaz
So...who's going to host the shower? ;)
hehe...
Oh I can't wait for the meeting! And everybody's reaction to the pregnancy! Cant wait for the next chapter..as always you deliver an amazing chapter :)
Awesome!
I seriously crave your stories. Keep them coming please. :)
Brilliant!!!
Good job,thanks u post it.i loovvve all u'r charracter,especially caleb&annie.can't wait next chapter
what they all said and more
Gee Whiz Jazz - I honestly never saw the pregnancy thing coming - wooohoooooo - you certainly keep us on our toes these days. One of your best chapters ever. Hugs, Kate
Damn!!
Well I did see it coming but not like this!! Loretta & Andrei having a baby....Awesome with a capital A!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh I hope none of the other couples do anything stupid like bite each other before the meeting.
Perfect
Love this story so much.
I knew it
I knew by page one that Loretta's "eggo was preggo" l.o.l. The symptoms sounded too much like a human pregnancy times 10 to be anything other than pregnancy, and since she didn't initially die from the vampire venom it would have been a bit moot for death to suddenly creep up on her now in the guise of the stomach flu. Ya know I think this is the very first time that Andrei actually called Rhianna "Annie". His love and devotion to Loretta is completely adorable. And I know for sure now that they are having a girl... just wonderful another female for Andrei to fuss and make death threats over.
I like the way that Caleb is handling the whole situation but I don't think that Jared will be too enthused with Caleb leaving him in the dark about the knowledge Caleb possesses and the plans Caleb and Demetri have made. And poor Nors... I can already tell that Ashleigh is all but going to harass him day and night until he gives into him biting her. Sounds exciting... now don't forget about the name I picked out for Ashleigh and Nor's future child... Nash-a big red-headed vampire/wolf hybrid could very well grow into a name like Nash and of course Andrei's and Loretta's daughter's name has to be Rose. l.o.l Can't wait for the next chapter.
OMG!!
What a twist!! I loved this one, Andrei putting aside his machoness to ask for Caleb's help - and all for love Ahhhhhhh! Now all we need is more!! MORE!!!!
Love, love, love!!!!
OMG!!!
I'm so loving this series, Jaz!!! I loooooove it! I'm doing a happy dance because Andrei smelled a scent of lilac~ Yay! Is Loretta preggo with a girl?? Take your time, but I'm waiting impatiently. lol
Zee~
awesome, i cannot wait until the next one
OMG
'OMG' totally covers it. HOLY CRAP. this is getting sooo ridiculously awesome :D
hot damn
Loved this one too!!!! WOO HOO another amazing chapter what a great story and it just seems to get better.
OMG!!!! Seriously?
This chapter had me screaming my kids thought something was wrong, I did NOT see Caleb knowing about inter-species coming and the pregnancy only when he was talking to Annie. Your writing is sooooooooooo good throwing in her feeling better as soon as she saw her mate was brilliant.
I am sitting on pins and needles for the next chapter.
Please HURRY!!!!
damn
I love your stories....I was wondering how this was going to play out and I think that they way you tackled it is great! Thank you!
WHOOOOAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok you got me!!!!I did not see that one coming from any direction!!!!! Pregnant!!!???? Wow....just wow. There really are no words.....wow.....sorry!
a little "underworld"
well caleb is an ancient , so him knowing things does not surprise me, and i still see one hell of a fight coming, not to mention freya running afoul of one of the were's , hope to see more soon
EACH ONE BETTER THAN THE LAST!!!!!!
Terrific, terrific, terrific. What an imagination! Hurry back and give us the next fantastic chapter! Thanks for sharing with us your wonderful gift.
omgomgomgomg OMFG!!!!
*flails and runs in circles*
BABIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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