Port Wine and Pink Lace

Wonderful work Ava...

Beautifully, beautifully crafted story. I just love the way you write; you have such a command of the language and your mind. Although the content wasn't my absolute favorite bits of the sexual spectrum, don't worry, you had my compass pointing north...well, north right up to the point that it upchucked and then it pointed south again...but that's the point of it pointing north in the first place and...well now I'm confusing even myself. My point (and that of my compass) is: Great Story!!

Thanks, Blaine

Dreamy Ride on a Train

Magnetic attraction and sexual tension told in stimulating style. Marvelous portrayal of lust and satiation; risk and reward.

What a picture you paint with your words!

The images you create with your words are so vivid. I can almost see the scene on that train. Such an exciting level of detail that paints such an erotic picture in my mind.... And now I need to try to go to sleep.

Great writing and VERY!! sexy.