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great!!
please keep going with this story~ I love it!!
i like this
so far this is good, She fell for him, and now likes him much more that he can treat her like she wanted to be treated back in day. I like this story so far.. keep going. thank you.
Good read
Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter
Great Chapter!
Plenty of info, funny, great chaqpter!
Moving Smoothly
He made a bit of sense in this chapter and so did she!
Great so far...
Great so far. I'm wondering what happened to Jen since she was also *with* Jeff. How many chapters do you think this story will be? Keep up the great work!
fifths??
I thought I had been following the story carefully but am at a loss to understand how she got the nick name of Fifths. Please inform.
Anonymi
1) I'm going to try to finish writing the story by the end of the month, but it's not a sure thing. I'm on Chapter 58 and I have the plot laid out.
2) Ashley took Jeff to a concert called “The Fifths.” Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony for the first half, and Tchaikovsky’s Fifth for the second. For herself she considered the prospect as appealing as cleaning up somebody else's vomit. But she was willing to go because she thought he would like it (Chapter 16).
3) I can't answer anonymous questions directly because they are anonymous. You can email from Lit and I'm trying very hard to answer without monumental delay.
4) You can send questions from www.peterschulman.com. When I answer those I don't have to worry about answering Literotica feedback inadvertantly (I'm working on it). I apologize to anyone who had to wait or is still waiting for a response. I don't have many left to track down.
Hill Fu***n Larious!
Each chapter shows a new facet of your writing skills, especially, "the understatement." I chuckled, laughed, and giggled like a damn kid through this installment. Thanks. Really looking to the other 2 million chapters. This better turn into a novel or we're going to collectively strangle you.
Wonderful Romance
I'm still waiting for the other shoe to fall but hope it doesn't. Each of them, Ashley and Jeff, have some unresolved baggage to unload. It seems like this aspect of their relationship has been glossed over by the positives of personal discovery.
The story has an Ozzie and Harriet quality about it. That is not bad, in fact, its innocence is quite enjoyable.
It is a great read and I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm glad I found you. Thank you for writing and sharing your stories with us readers.
Absolutely wonderful
I'm now addicted to this story. What a wonderful love affair. I feel like the
followers of HArry Potter. LOve it, your very talented. i long to have a love like this in my life. thank you.
Dry opinion
Fairytailish, but I love it.
Absurd
I was loving the series up until this chapter when it became absurdly unrealistic. Yes, it's been unrealistic throughout, and yes, the characters couldn't be more stereotypical, but that's half the fun of the fantasy. However, these developments are so ridiculous that it ruined the fun entirely.
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