All Comments on 'Revenge of the Nerd Ch. 25'

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angelshellieangelshellieover 13 years ago
great!!

please keep going with this story~ I love it!!

gzerotgzerotover 13 years ago
i like this

so far this is good, She fell for him, and now likes him much more that he can treat her like she wanted to be treated back in day. I like this story so far.. keep going. thank you.

sailordblj1966sailordblj1966over 13 years ago
Good read

Keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Chapter!

Plenty of info, funny, great chaqpter!

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Moving Smoothly

He made a bit of sense in this chapter and so did she!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great so far...

Great so far. I'm wondering what happened to Jen since she was also *with* Jeff. How many chapters do you think this story will be? Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
fifths??

I thought I had been following the story carefully but am at a loss to understand how she got the nick name of Fifths. Please inform.

rpsuchrpsuchover 13 years agoAuthor
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<p>1) I'm going to try to finish writing the story by the end of the month, but it's not a sure thing. I'm on Chapter 58 and I have the plot laid out.</p>

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<p>2) Ashley took Jeff to a concert called “The Fifths.” Beethoven’s Fifth Symphony for the first half, and Tchaikovsky’s Fifth for the second. For herself she considered the prospect as appealing as cleaning up somebody else's vomit. But she was willing to go because she thought he would like it (Chapter 16).</p>

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<p>3) I can't answer anonymous questions directly because they are anonymous. You can email from Lit and I'm trying very hard to answer without monumental delay.</p>

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4) You can send questions from www.peterschulman.com. When I answer those I don't have to worry about answering Literotica feedback inadvertantly (I'm working on it). I apologize to anyone who had to wait or is still waiting for a response. I don't have many left to track down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hill Fu***n Larious!

Each chapter shows a new facet of your writing skills, especially, "the understatement." I chuckled, laughed, and giggled like a damn kid through this installment. Thanks. Really looking to the other 2 million chapters. This better turn into a novel or we're going to collectively strangle you.

brujaybrujayover 13 years ago
Wonderful Romance

I'm still waiting for the other shoe to fall but hope it doesn't. Each of them, Ashley and Jeff, have some unresolved baggage to unload. It seems like this aspect of their relationship has been glossed over by the positives of personal discovery.

The story has an Ozzie and Harriet quality about it. That is not bad, in fact, its innocence is quite enjoyable.

It is a great read and I'm looking forward to reading more. I'm glad I found you. Thank you for writing and sharing your stories with us readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Absolutely wonderful

I'm now addicted to this story. What a wonderful love affair. I feel like the

followers of HArry Potter. LOve it, your very talented. i long to have a love like this in my life. thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Fairytailish, but I love it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absurd

I was loving the series up until this chapter when it became absurdly unrealistic. Yes, it's been unrealistic throughout, and yes, the characters couldn't be more stereotypical, but that's half the fun of the fantasy. However, these developments are so ridiculous that it ruined the fun entirely.

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