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Colour Me In You

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by Anonymous10/11/10

That was THE most beautiful story I have ever read.

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by Anonymous10/11/10

Yes it is beautiful

and your words entranced me.

Although I have to confess, I didn't fully understand it. Perhaps that's because I'm not on the same level, perhaps that you expected others to understand more instantly what was in your heart, or perhaps because there is more to come?

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by ticklechambers10/12/10

thanks :)

If you didn't understand it, it's possibly because of the continuous use of metaphor. I don't know :) But if this is the case, maybe read it again and try not to take the references to paint and colour in literal terms... it's a little abstract.

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