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Marie's Young Lover

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by Quillman10/11/10

Nice story

A gentle, unhurried and well written story. Able to get in the mindset of both participants - always a good sign.

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by Anonymous10/13/10

Beautiful

You could feel the author progressing on tip-toe trying not to break the erotic mood that was developing. Definitely a story that needs a chapter 2 etc. etc. Very definitely !!

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