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by Lauren Hynde

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RybkaRybkaabout 20 years ago
Any Time You Want It. . . Any Time at All

Your last lines tie it all up. - tie the whole world up in the artist's eye! :rose:

"so I did like poets do,

erasing reality

to replace it with a better one."

>?)))><

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Now here's an interesting piece of Lauren's from 4 years back...

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
optimistic conclusion.

Time spent ~ nothing settled - but optimism continues to rear its hopeful head.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Time..

is of the essence..

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