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Like Traci said...
"fair is fair".....glad it ain't ME!
So let me get this straight?
Traci was behind this pool payment scheme the ENTIRE time? I never saw this one coming at all.
KEEP THEM COMMING
Please don't leave Jill out of the mix!
You just had to go and fucking ruin it, yeah? Man, this sucks.
It couldn't go on forever. Just about the right ending I think. Thanks for a good series.
Aaaannnd that's where I hop off..
Not even reading the rest of the series. The edge is gone, and with it, the enjoyable aspect of the premise. Good while it lasted, though!
About time he got caught!
Thanks I don't like to leave a story encouraging cheating.
The fantasy was destroyed
It might be tit for tat to involve Greg, but I found it a big turnoff. It might partly be because of protagonist bias, but I don't like the idea of him willingly sharing his wife even though he had sex with other mens' wives.
Also any kind of threesome should involve two women in my opinion.
If I were ever to reread this story I would stop at chaper 10 and forget the last two even existed.
Agreed with ib_says it stops being fun here and becomes agrevating i may be hipocritical but i will never share my wife or woman for any reason just a big turn of for me
And then greg ruined it. Lame addition. Just killed all previous 10 chapters.
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