by TheDarkCloud
way to violent and disgusting belongs in the bdsm area not incest USE THE PROPER CATAGORIES
and an even sicker fuck to enjoy reading it! Had you put it in BDSM where it belongs, I wouldn't have stumbled into it. It was pretty awful; One Star here.
Excellent story! Excited to see where this goes next...
It's between a brother and sister and belongs in this catagory.
Good story. Next one could be mother submitting to son.
ignore the negativity, this was hot
awaiting the next chapter and how far he can take Julie
I've read a lot of your fabulous tales (infact they are what inspired me to join up) and I'm not into incest at all, but due to your usual calibre i read it anyway and wow! It didn't disappoint! (maybe because I like to imagine I was the girl)
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This insecure little sadist is afraid that if he doesn't beat and torment women he can't think of himself s a man. What a seriously sick little sexist pig you are. I hope that the guys at Joe's Garage find out about this and shove a greasy baseball bat into your ass and really s-t-r-e-t-c-h you until you have to wear diapers for a month. I hope they get some really filthy slut—I mean a REAL slut—to piss and shit on you before you're tied down for the night. And of course they put an ad in the newspaper...
Dude, this sucked! You completely misused the tags! This isn't femdom, the boy clearly dominated the girl, yet your tags would imply the opposite.
At the end of part one she was left in the bathroom with a ball gag!
In part two she has no gag and can talk to her brother when he returns.
He brings the blonde into the parents room with the double bed. But leaves the bathroom after pissing on his sister for his own room with a single bed.
Kind of hard to fuck the blonde you bring home from a bar if you are in two different bedrooms!
She was originally bound to the pipe in the shower in part one by the leash. In part two she is handcuffed to the pipe.
I like she had to pay the whore she was forced to eat out.!!!!
The hair cutting off will be humiliating for her! But as a hair guy myself, I can’t see myself fucking a girl with a buzz cut. I need a mane or lots of locks to tug on as I fuck her from behind especially , like a collared and leashed dog/bitch!!!
Now if I was collecting her hair as a fetish or to make something sexy with, then it could be okay! Sis’s Hair will grow back.
But having sexual fun until it grows back won’t be much fun!
All in all a great two stories!!
Can’t wait to read more, after all they have thirteen more days till their parents return home from vacation!!!
This reminds me of my sis asking to show her how to fuck as she had told her boss she was good in bed and had date a week later. I spent 5 days humiliating sis shaved her cunt put a stud in her clit. I fucked her arse cunt at least 30 times we will still meet up every September to fuck as best sex we have ever had