All Comments on 'Our Game of Life'

I HATE stories that have no ending. There is no warning or chapter number in the title. I guess you just got tired and stopped. Too bad, it was good.

There is definitely more coming. Have actually written the whole story and am editing it and submitting it in portions. Sorry about that. I hate stories without endings too. Will be sure to add a chapter number. Thank you for the comment.

i note that more is coming , that is good, you have set up an interesting story and wait with anticipation for its next installment

That's it???

What happened little girl? You write so well. It doesn't need to be perfect, that would be unnatural.

I despise giving out low scores.

That being said, I dislike unfinished stories far more.

This pisses me off so much. You wrote something that was clearly a the beginning to a series. The title made it seem it was a complete story in itself. And then you say you are submitting it slowly. Well, where are the submissions. I feel so mad and tricked. (You don’t owe us anything obviously, but damn I still feel mad and frustrated.)