All Comments on 'Siblings with Benefits Ch. 17'

thank you for satisfying my craving for this story

How many more chapters are you planning on for this story? Will you take us back to the present & tell how they end up?

OMG.. Thank you sooo much i love the story, i wish i had a brother like MARK!!! His soo fucking awesome my dream come true.-smirk-

Cant wait for the next chapter! again thanks a lot for the story your the best Literotica writer ever! hoping to see more and more and more about Megan and her sweet little sick puppy of a brother Mark!! :D

-Marz-

From the first time Mark takes his sister in Chapter one, when this series went from a sister visiting her brother, her "Sibling with benefit" of the last 15+ years where I thought okay, they'll go in his bed, have sex, she needs him so it will be sweet.. at that moment we meet "Mark" who has to be the darkest character I have read on this site, and who proceeds in his Desade like bedroom to tear his sister to shreds. I have read all 19 chapters, but this is my Fav. I mean you even throw in a fight scene and it works! The depth of the characters is unrivaled, and even though honestly they would be the kind of people I should hate I find myself feeling for them. I'm sure this series has not had a lot of mass appeal, with the BDSM and occult references, nevermind the abuse they endured and how melancholy your narratives are, but I think it's the best series currently running on the site and just wanted to tell you that I cannot wait to see how you put this thing to bed!

The violence is difficult for me, but your writing and character development is brilliant, so sensitive.

wow, only chapter I read, perhaps back to chapter 1 now

From terrible to terrific the violence is always a factor in Mark’s demeanor and his sister loves it and him. Hard to believe any woman would take such abuse to get fucked. It will be interesting to see how this story develops.