The Naive Wife

Dumb premise

Been on cruises. All the little lady would need to do would be to go to the front desk and explain that she had been suckered into the situation, and believe me, the cruise line would have found an alternative for her. The last thing that they would need would be an accusation of rape (the threat of using a date rape drug?), and they would probably have Matt off the boat at the next port-of-call. Stupid premise that a woman is ever without resources for dealing with an overly aggressive, lying, scumbags. The good news? It was a short story!

Bad!!!

Hey Bob!!!!

Not my deal

Normally I can enjoy a JPB story, but for some reason this one just hit a raw nerve.

The ships doctor could take a blood test

and all she had to do after that is file rape charges against the entire group. Sorry JPB but it is just another poorly thought out story line.

Not too good

Measured against most of your stories, this one was not too good.

But the good part is, this is my very first comment as a registered user.

I take the story for what it is , A good fantasy

The thought of the sweet young wife going on a trip and becoming a slut is very erotic. Maybe she was always a slut and just repressed her desires. Now that she knows what it feels like to have a gang bang, she just might enjoy more of them.

Good thought and a well written story, thanks.

Are some of these commentators serious?

These are stories, fantasies, they are not real.

Just read them and wank, that's why you came here, and if you have to say something, say something encouraging, after all we don't want to discourage those who go to so much trouble to create and share these stories so we can all get boners.

Thank you Bob, my cock and I enjoyed your story, keep up the good work.

PostScriptor and other are right.

This story could not and would not happen. I don't know much about cruise ships but without any doubt she would talk to someone in authority.

Even in the extremely unlikely event that she didn't talk to someone in authority, it is impossible that 5 intelligent people, 3 men and two women, would agree to get involved in rape, drugging someone, and conspiracy to drug someone, conspiracy to commit rate, and conspiracy to blackmail. We are talking about felonies of 10 to 20 years for each charge.

Of course, according to the writer, being drugged and rape are not traumatic experiences and instead women love being raped because it turns them into sluts.

I gave this garbage a 1.

This was more than just disappointment, it turned to shit earley on!

ANCHORS AWAY ALL HANDS ON DICK

wave riding on board. Reckoning day is coming, TK U MLJ LV NV

`Nice half of a story, Bob...

...and that´s just what it really is: Half a story..

WHEN DOES NAIVE CHANGE

to just plain stupid. TK U MLJ LV NV

Rape

2*

Disgussting! Rape and nothing good about this story at all!

Anyone that gets sexually excited about a story like this is mentally sick and needs to be put in a mental institution! What the fuck is wrong with you Bob?

All the tape did?

Was send them all to jail for rape. Dumb Bob. Really dumb.