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by Anonymous

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo10/11/10

all three today

minimalist

intent with few words

verbs working

no -ly words

few prepositions

filling, yet leaving my mind to question

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by tigerjen02/01/11

Very simplistic...few words speak so much....well done!

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