All Comments on 'Danya's Bitch Ch. 03'

You really need to either get an editor to look over your writing or learn to do it better yourself. There is nothing as distracting to a story as poor spelling or writing.

Do yourself a favour and get on that, the sooner the better.

I really liked this story in its first three parts - I hope you will continue with it. Thank you.

thanks for the feedback guys, next time i'll try to read it over in detail before submitting.

very hot

Dayna the type of girl every boy wants to fuck on the side.