All Comments on 'Vampire On Cardiff Road'

Reasonable premise here that could be fun, but this moved way too fast. I didn't care for the present tense, either. What happened to the girl, anyway? The sequence of them looking through the window was a bit confusing as well.

please consider writing another chapter,im interested in seeing what,if anything,Catherine and Dee do with Geneva

... with both PennLady and Criss's coments and I think if you do a part 2 you should rewrigt this part so it isn't so rough. It just needs some work to be rather good.