Bedding the Babysitter Ch. 02

OMG!! Another great pussy wetting story :D

A real pleasure!

The mixture of control and genuinely non-possessive warmth as Megan tutors (mentors?) Jenny was extraordinary. In the sexually charged melieu of Literotica, Megan is like an idealized mother, delighting in Jenny's developing sense of herself as a sexual being, one who has both desires of her own and a growing capacity to meet others' desires. The "shock" at the end of this installment is, fittingly, when Megan discovers an actual mother--the governor--who is doing/has done this for her actual daughter. The whole thing works on so many levels! Really nice job.

ABOVE AND BEYOND !

This chapter is above and beyon any expectations I had after reading chapter 1. The Mistress - Slave dynamic and non possesive love and caring is a Beautiful thing to see. I will say Keep up the good work and Thank you for the stories.

Good Work!

I really liked this tory.
I was impressed with the kindness of the Misstress
Keep writing.

Great

Great story, I hope that you continue with this series, it seems like there is many ways this can continue.

Superb

OMG
That was fantastic.
Please do another story, especially about Jenny doing the cheerleaders.

Top Stroke in the Boat

You can write it hot--now write it right. "Ado" not adieu. "Disdain" not distain. That said, your stuff is so fucking hot I really wouldn't care if you're illiterate.

Fantastic

You have quickly become either my favorite, or one of my favorite authors on this site, and I must really say, keep up this fantastic work. Also, I can't wait to see what sort of shenanigans Jenny gets into with the cheerleading team. That being said, there were a few typos, nothing that pulled me away from the story, just minor things - perhaps an extra reading in the editing stage would help.

Again, thanks for the amazing stories!

Yes!

I second the comment about Jenny doing the cheerleaders!!!!!

hot story...what happened to Karen tho

Way hoTttttttt

I thought it was way hot and the Nigger comment that's their opinion that's the best part I love black on white lesbian action I've been trying to get my girl to do a black girl forever.My girl said I'f I'd let a black guy do me in the as she'd eat a black girl and everything tempting,however she thought about me saying how could you resist those huge black lips slobbering all over your pussy and she said she would but wouldn't eAt unless really horny or if I get fucked in my ass by a black man. White guy in delema?????????

HOTTTT

Very hot story i need me a submissive slut!!

i need a sub too

i soooooooooooo have to get me a lezzie sub.

dominated

These make me want to be a sub even more. So wet right now, and I wish I had someone to please.

not bad, but...

You need to keep both hands above the desk when you're typing.

"Jenny considered this, really considered it and finally said surprisingly upbeat, "I trust you mistress. I will *never* obey anything you ask of me and if you think this is a good idea, then I do too."

Right. Really obedient.

You have a character "memorized by" sommething. You mean mesmerized.

And much else. Hot story in places though, but bloody repetitive.

Suzzie in Los Gatos. (Lick me up sometime.)

if that's you

if that is your picture, i love your legs ;)

Wanna be at that club!

Story is so good! Any subs dream! Makes me want to be Jenny so bad!!

I love ALL your stories, but

There are a lot of grammatical & spelling errors. The number one that can irk an educated (but horny & kinky) reader is pique. One does not "peak" or "peek" an interest but rather, "pique" - French for -- to Stimulate (interest or curiosity). Otherwise your writing is a whole lot of fun! Thank you!
Ditch Kitty

More please!

Oh my, silkstockingslover I am so pleased to have discovered your writing. Keep up the good work.

Omfg

Omfg that had me rubbing my pussy! If any woman who sees this wants a young 20yr old slave email me gothicbian20@gmail.com or if ur in the USA text 575-607-6533 i await ur text/email mistress btw names luna marie

Better still than the very hot, well-written first part

Yes, you are a very good writer of hot, hot stories, silkstockingslover.

I intend to send you a thought or two by email soon.

I am hooked, ma'am.

Jenny is hooked and darn proud of it

Jenny found out really quickly that she's a cunt slut, and loves her new place in life. She will service the Cheerleading Team, but tonight she services the Governor!

Excellent!

I don't mind some spelling mistakes. Any editor of a publishing house can correct them. But there are not many writers who can compose such a hot story. My compliments.

This is amazing!

Damn, you're an excellent writer! I hope you keep writing and I can't wait to read more of this series. Jenny is so faithful to her mistress and I have to say the realization that Jenny and Megan love each other was very adorable.

Loved this story so much.

I loved how you thoughtfully introduced your slave although she certainly is a dab hand.To me there is a sweetness to the story. Just want to say thank you.

fast moving story.

Megan can sure make people submit in a hurry. Which is something we all need to do. I hope it will be my turn to learn how to submit soon

unbelievable

This chapter is not very good. Unlike the first one which is very believable this one was awful. It went from being good to being bad. I don't know if I will read the rest of the chapters. I didn't like the way that you brought all of the other women together so fast. Especially didn't like the way that you brought Karen into the story. You had a Iincredible chance to make the meeting with Karen last throughout the whole chapter. I was very disappointed that you didn't. BC

Ophelia

any chance we can get a chapter or 5 of what happened just before and then after Ophelia , deb and Zelda where in the club , maybe all the way up to Ophelia's wedding , which she then cancels and marries both Deb and Zelda and they have a poly Lesbian 3 way marriage ???

added

I wrote this i would have added just before Ophelia , Zelda and Deb left , that Megan offers to deb and Zelda to convert more straight in the future if they get bored with Ophelia even , but if they do its Debs tur n to eat Megan first LOL

Can you help me ?

I seem to recall reading a story that mentioned begin at this same place and now I can't remember the author that cross your story character's
Please assist me.

Makes me do things late at night

I just want to tell you that Jayne and other older girls make me do things late at night, after reading this Tory to them. I do what they tell me, the make me spread open for them, because that's my job. I need to do exactly what they tell me, they tell me how far to spread my legs, how far to open up., what my role is.

I want to thank you for everything, your stories help me to understand where ie belong, what my place is, why I need t spread open for older girls.

I thank you so much,

I can't stop,
I won't ever stop,

Xxoo

Candy

Slap me,
Spank me,
Show me,
Slut

Wonderful

Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to read the next one.

Thank you

A true dream chapter, I too in love with Youg/Old Lesbian stories. Thank you very much.

Rosie

Nice that Rosie made a come back. I read about her in your previous stories. I like

dominate

Looks like Jenny is getting a very fast and good education!!

delicious

god o wish that club was a real place