All Comments on 'Using Halloween to Dress as a Queen'

This seem like a setup chapter, used to tell about a story about a certain evening where he dressed up, than a completed story. It tells of his enjoyment of crossdressing, but it almost needs a second chapter where a single event, maybe the first time he did it, locked in his love for cross dressing.

the story was well written it was so well thought out.

another of the great bits of writing that you know for well done

you.

while not exactly my kind of story it was again well written , and enjoyable sp please keep up the good work , and hopefully you will write a story to suit my tastes very soon ;)

This can't be a complete story. As the other reviewer pointed out, it does sound a bit like an opener. The third-person perspective got a little tedious at times, though exploration of his psyche and motivations was well done.

As much as I like the idea of your story, you really need to use a proofreader. Tryging tu undercut whut yuo mean sumtimes can bee a chore.

this story was a nice peek inside the struggle to be true to self in the face of social pressures.

It was kind of long, mostly because the character never seemed to arrive anywhere. While it is important to relay the struggle, we don't get to experience his joy of becoming.

The story lacks any sex scene or erotic overtones, so it should be in the Non-Erotic category.

With the way you wrote the story, it seems to me that you would be able to write an encounter Jerry might have while performing. Give us the dialogue. Describe the temptation of being thought a woman by some attractive stranger. Let him be unable to reveal the maleness of himself, because of the sweet, fulfilling joy of being desired just as she is. You've got the skill. Please add on to this beginning.

Way too long. Great writing for an article in some psychology magazine, but not what we come here to read. I went limp...

Thank so very much with the "We" thing. You just lumped everyone into a category that fits Your needs. If you didn't like it just say so. Otherwise don't comment. A little constructive criticism would have been better. You may think We didn't come to read it, yet You read it. How charming indeed.

TBC

I went several times to bars as a woman and it was a real exciting time for me.

As a cross dresser halloween is my favorite time of the year. I love going out all dressed up. I love wearing stockings, panties, corset with garter straps and bra with a dress. I have long hair so no need for a wig and love wearing make up. I love it when guys hit on me they know I am a male but it's fantasy that they want to act out and some of the lucky one's get there wish with me.

My first time publicy dressed as a female was summer in amsterdam nervous stepping out in a mini dress hold ups panties wig and make up. Nobody remarked and even some smiles i felt relieved. Walking around and going to bars as the evening went on and being asked to dance by men thrilled me i felt good. Dancing a slow one and being kissed full tongue swapping while others seen was incredible and feeling the guys erection against my leg was incredible. I knew mine was stirring and decided to let him know i had a penis as well and moved again him. He responded by rubbing mine and kissing me so no doubt he knew and was enjoying it. We walked out and ended up having sex in an alleyway me facing a wall and him behind me fucking me with my pants around my ankles. At this stage i didnt care if someone seen us and it would only turn me on more. We went back in and after a while he introduced me to a friend and we all went back to where i was staying and i had the best night ever swallowing their semen and being fucked just like the slut i wanted to be. Paul(a) in the UK