Dude, pay no attention to the asshats complaining about double-standards. Keep doing what you're doing. I, for one, am enjoying the hell out of the story. Your sexual humor is great, and the rest of the story is nothing short of wonderful.
As for my anonymous predecessor, get a life, man. It's humor, sexy humor. Get over yourself and learn how to have fun, AND learn how to enjoy a FANTASY. That's what this is, FAN-TA-SY... get it?
okay I've been reading this story pretty much non-stop since yesterday. I cannot pull myself away from it. I get completely turned on by it AND I find myself laughing and really being invested in the characters. You are an incredible writer and I can't wait to get to the rest of the story. I'm seriously in awe and am bowing down to your skills. AMAZING. Thank you!
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Anonymous10/18/13
Awesome
This story is amazing I cant stop reading it and the voice cracks me up
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Anonymous01/07/14
see the problem with suddenly turning Emma into a lesbian half way through this is that she's a second predator in his harem and the encounter at the end of this chapter has her exerting her dominance over him.
i still find her first time with mike bizarre and hollow and i've grown to hate her bisexual antics as the story progresses. Danni and Sarah you can feel belong to mike in the sense that they're utterly addicted to him. not so with Emma and at the start i thought she woudl be the one closest. a sad mark in an otherwise fan-fucking-tastic tale.
I normally never comment but as you've noticed from previous chapters. I love your story so much I cant help but comment. And I totally love where your taking Mike and Em. given there close relationship cause of them being twins, it makes sense that she would have more of an equal relationship with him than the others. lol sound confusing let me explain lol. (this is for the crazy Anonymous people who dont like this aspect of the story) I think as a twin you would always try to be the dominant one (especially given her personality) so why now that you add lust to the equation you all of a sudden expect the author to change her personality because you want the author to. dont work that way. Sit back and enjoy this epic story and shut it with the bull. thank you
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Anonymous03/23/14
I dont get anons bitch below about the bisexual stuff, not like theres a chance in hell that mike could possibly keep four women in their twenties sexually satisfied. No. Fucking. Way. Good for them if a couple of them want to get together and have a licking party!
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Anonymous01/22/15
poor guy
I had a noise in my head last year that the two times i had it. never went away so i am feeling his pain and want to jump into the story to tell his sisters so that he can get help. Cus it hurts so much to read about how they treat him
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Anonymous09/08/15
The voice
I know I said this for ch. 12 but I love it. It says some of the craziest things
The title says it all.
Keep up the good work, do not ever give up writing. It would be a crime, to deprive your readership of the joy and satisfaction of enjoying your magnificent; evocative; erotic and emotionally moving stories. All the very best. Den
unbelievable...
Dude, pay no attention to the asshats complaining about double-standards. Keep doing what you're doing. I, for one, am enjoying the hell out of the story. Your sexual humor is great, and the rest of the story is nothing short of wonderful.
As for my anonymous predecessor, get a life, man. It's humor, sexy humor. Get over yourself and learn how to have fun, AND learn how to enjoy a FANTASY. That's what this is, FAN-TA-SY... get it?
AMAZING
okay I've been reading this story pretty much non-stop since yesterday. I cannot pull myself away from it. I get completely turned on by it AND I find myself laughing and really being invested in the characters. You are an incredible writer and I can't wait to get to the rest of the story. I'm seriously in awe and am bowing down to your skills. AMAZING. Thank you!
Awesome
This story is amazing I cant stop reading it and the voice cracks me up
see the problem with suddenly turning Emma into a lesbian half way through this is that she's a second predator in his harem and the encounter at the end of this chapter has her exerting her dominance over him.
i still find her first time with mike bizarre and hollow and i've grown to hate her bisexual antics as the story progresses. Danni and Sarah you can feel belong to mike in the sense that they're utterly addicted to him. not so with Emma and at the start i thought she woudl be the one closest. a sad mark in an otherwise fan-fucking-tastic tale.
Love your story
I normally never comment but as you've noticed from previous chapters. I love your story so much I cant help but comment. And I totally love where your taking Mike and Em. given there close relationship cause of them being twins, it makes sense that she would have more of an equal relationship with him than the others. lol sound confusing let me explain lol. (this is for the crazy Anonymous people who dont like this aspect of the story) I think as a twin you would always try to be the dominant one (especially given her personality) so why now that you add lust to the equation you all of a sudden expect the author to change her personality because you want the author to. dont work that way. Sit back and enjoy this epic story and shut it with the bull. thank you
I dont get anons bitch below about the bisexual stuff, not like theres a chance in hell that mike could possibly keep four women in their twenties sexually satisfied. No. Fucking. Way. Good for them if a couple of them want to get together and have a licking party!
poor guy
I had a noise in my head last year that the two times i had it. never went away so i am feeling his pain and want to jump into the story to tell his sisters so that he can get help. Cus it hurts so much to read about how they treat him
The voice
I know I said this for ch. 12 but I love it. It says some of the craziest things
Yeah
This chapter was amazing I flipping cried when he outwitted the awesome voice.
the fucking voice
That fucking voice of his is so fucking hilarious, it was awesome that he outwitted it
The voice
I dunno. I find the voice incredibly obnoxious, but the rest of the story has me hooked.
The voice
I love it. It's so funny
SUPERLATIVE!!! 😀
The title says it all.
Keep up the good work, do not ever give up writing. It would be a crime, to deprive your readership of the joy and satisfaction of enjoying your magnificent; evocative; erotic and emotionally moving stories. All the very best. Den
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