by Sockloverz
bout time someone wrote a bit more socked stories, very sexy, bring on future stories
I love the idea, but the writing is not so good. It lessens the effect of the story when there are so many spelling mistakes and weird grammar. Also a lot of repetition. You could have used something to check the spelling at least, and perhaps asked someone to comment on your writing before submitting it. Keep writing and you will eventually achieve greatness though!
Nice story, could use some more barefoot action. But dude, you should really try to check your spelling... Writing stuff like "would of" and - even worse - "wouldn't of" just makes it look like you don't even understand the basics of the english language.