by srlmort
Lol tried to click onto the next page (*grin* because I NEEDED there to be another page), and there was no next page...arrgh! Really good story, and can not wait for the next chapter!
This looks like the beginning of a good story. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
great start, im looking forward to reading other chapters...write faster
It was nice...It made me smile..I like it so far..keep going,plz!!lol
All I could think was nk (while envisioning a picket fence)