Very good! A little choppy here and there with mechanics but not much. It did feel a little rushed at times, an issue I struggle with as well. I enjoyed it! I'll add you to favorites and hope for another story soon.
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Anonymous10/15/10
Yes!!!
A woman who really enjoys sex is a rare treat . You really should continue with this woman's journey of loving and being loved .
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Anonymous10/15/10
very erotic
loved reading this story made me very horny would love to read more of theie adventures.
Loved it! I couldn't wait to read the sequel. You were on your way to a great sequel too, but then you had to mess it up. Too bad.
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Anonymous03/20/12
What is this. This vile deluded story.
This is disgusting and insane.What is wrong with you? This is not normal. Porn messes with you mind. Stop consuming it. You need to seek help. /r/NoFap and /r/PornFree.
@Anonymous6: If you think incest is vile and disgusting why did you search for stories about it. Even if you didn't actively search for incest, this story is tagged as such and should have gave you all the warring you would need.
English
VERY good start!
Nice flow, very hot. I'd recommend using an editor next time. The ideas were good but the writing was a little choppy and too many typos.
Wonderful
Oh so fucking hot, What would I not do to suck and fuck that lush cunt to sex heaven
umm
part 2?
Bravo!
A delightful story - well executed and very naughty! Looking forward to the next!
wonderful
i loved it so hot and really very believable
when u need it u need it
good job and who cares about english lesson lol
Sexy stuff
Very good! A little choppy here and there with mechanics but not much. It did feel a little rushed at times, an issue I struggle with as well. I enjoyed it! I'll add you to favorites and hope for another story soon.
Yes!!!
A woman who really enjoys sex is a rare treat . You really should continue with this woman's journey of loving and being loved .
very erotic
loved reading this story made me very horny would love to read more of theie adventures.
Nicely Done!
Can't wait to read more! going to love what happens after she tells her friend about her evening... More parties at mom's house???
Quite lovely but...
Her son's name was Mark Marks?
SO HOT
My fucking god that was hottttt.....i came like a horse all over a picture of my mom!!! Great stuff!
Great Story
Loved it! I couldn't wait to read the sequel. You were on your way to a great sequel too, but then you had to mess it up. Too bad.
What is this. This vile deluded story.
This is disgusting and insane.What is wrong with you? This is not normal. Porn messes with you mind. Stop consuming it. You need to seek help. /r/NoFap and /r/PornFree.
Awesome story
Awesome story
@Anonymous6: If you think incest is vile and disgusting why did you search for stories about it. Even if you didn't actively search for incest, this story is tagged as such and should have gave you all the warring you would need.
Wonderful story.
It was so hot. I could see myself doing something like Rachel did.
excellent story
Loved this story.Made me so hard.
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