The Lady and the Cowboy Ch. 08

I've read this so many times and I love it more each time! It's wonderful. I hope you write some more stories someday.

Crying, in such a good way!

I am so incredibly glad that I found this story! I read all but the last chapter in the course of one day, and finished the story the next morning. What a sweet way to begin my day! This story drew me in, engrossed me, and I found it so hard to stop! Wonderful wonderful writing!

So lovely!

I typically never comment on any story, but yours was absolutely wonderful. Thank you very much!!

Four Words: ....Cried like a fool....

Read every chapter in one day, it was that good. I loved the humor, the setting, the characters, and the romance. I had a feeling this was gonna be amazing but once I read that last line I cried like a baby. Absolutely loved how you ended it with the filly. A stroke of genius. I still go back and read that line and I still end up crying. PLEASE PLEASE make another story!!!! You're amazing!!!!

wow!

it was so heartfelt and beautiful! great work!

Read it before and for some reason decided to read it again

and marveled anew. Thank you. The last sentence particularly was wonderful.

Lovely!

So so so wonderful :) :) made my heart fly

Awesome!

So very HOT! It was amazing and I think you should add another chapter of happily ever after! Thanks

Happy sobbing ...

Such a wonderful romantic story. I'm sad that this story is over and really depressed that you haven't written new stories. I know tonight my hubby is going to give a heavy sigh, roll his eyes and hug me close while I start blathering about Tripp and Kira.

You write as one with experience.

You write as one who has experienced being swept away by a loving mate. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you for saving the foal!

I loved the whole story and especially finding out at the end that the foal had survived.

Thanks again for a wonderful story.

Great work

I enjoyed your story, especially the begining. It had a certain "Dirty Dancing" feel to it with the Summer vacation and forbidden love with the "help". I found the ending a little too soppy with love for my taste, but I suppose you were trying for that. Kira seemed a bit less mature than a regular 19 year old and frankly showed very little respect for her parents or the Watermans. When she said "I'm staying with Tripp and you can't stop me" she seemed quite impetuous and though I know love makes the best of us irrational, I found her attitude and disregard for her parents' concerns to be childish and disrespectful. In addition, the 27 year old Tripp should have known better to ignore the whole situation and dissapear to the coral. He should have been there to talk to her parents and alieviate some of their concerns,To be the mature, caring, loving manyou want him to be, he should have talked to her parents. Plus, it would show that he gave a damn about whether she was allowed stay. His absence seems out of character to me.
I'm saying all this, not to discourage you, but to help you to write better in the future. You have skill with words that many people wish for. Work on it and get even better.

A great series

I did enjoy the series immensly. However, like the previous commentator, the level of maturity of all the players were slightly off kilter. There was also ample opportunity for her to develope a better relationship to the Watermans as well but that was glossed over.

Even with the slight problem above, I still rated the series as a 5 and have favorited it as I do love a good story.

Reminding me of my cowboy

Thank you for this story, it brought back many good memories of my cowboy!

Words to quit...

You could leave out cock, cunt (which many abhor), pussy and you would have the most arousing of stories still. Leaving a little to the imagination is good. I loved it!

wonderful

Was very erotic loved it,the 4 th chapter was amazingly sexy and romantic love it

I loved it!!!

Hard to believe this is your first story... you certainly have a flair for writing a wonderful erotic romance... Keep up the great work, I'll be looking forward to reading your future endeavors!!!

I loved each and every chapter!

Have you submitted anything to Harlequin Romance? If not, you definitely should! You will be rich and very well known! Have a wonderful future!

in love!

I loved, loved, loved your story! you should publish a book! please write more stories very soon! Cant wait!

What an incredible...

first work you have here. I read it straight thru the night. will look for more from you.

thank you

This story was truly amazing! I think this is the fourth time I've read it and even though i know what's going to happen im still swept away. Well done.

Good read

A well constructed and thoughtful story

Well done

Your story is sweet and romantic, and obviously written from the point of view of a lady - a girl. So many of the stories written are not that way. You express emotion seldom seen anymore because love seems to have become a business - not a relationship. I liked the character development and the raw emotion that you expressed. You did it well.

My only question is 'why haven't you written more?' You're a good writer. There is more you can do, and if you have gone commercial, please let us know where to buy your work.

very lovely story

I'm waiting for this series to come out as a movie on Hallmark; it's been added to my All-Time Favorite bookmarks.

As others have said; the characters, emotions and story seem real

Thank you;
DKP

BTW; love "wettest wet" 8~)

Best series of this whole site!

I was caught by the first story and had to keep reading! It is refreshing to read a story that is so romantic and well written. Thank you for your wonderful story and the time you took to share it with the world.

I really enjoyed the story. Thank you. Hope you can write more :)

With the strength of a thousand horses

aw, I loved this series. Beautiful story. I'm so glad they found a way to work it out. I would have loved to have a brother like Luke. Actually have a guy like Tripp.

more.

Please write some more
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Loved it!

Loved it!

What a series!

Kris, this is far and away the best series I've ever read! That your scoring average is less than 5.0 on every chapter is simply unbelievable. Thank you for writing it!

I LOVE your series, I can read them over and over again.

love it

I loved your series.great work.thank you

i love this series, read it so manytimes.

Loved it and have read it many times but it's agitating with how often the days are mixed up. I.e. Something that happened yesterday is referred to as a couple days ago etc I think you should do a second part of this series in tripp's point of view :)

Great story

I truly enjoyed your story and the characters in it. Can't wait to read more of your work.

great series, please write more! I loved the characters and the setting. You built a great story and it was fun to read

PLEASE WRITE MORE

You HAVE to write more

I have until now never commented on any stories but you HAVE to write a lot more and soon. This was a really magnificent story, I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

VERY WELL DONE. Other writers please take note of this story

This was by far the best erotic story I have ever read! I personally have a thing for country boys, so this really hit the spot for me. And the horse, California, was a great addition to the story, I would never be able to think of putting things like that in one. 10/10! Stay inspired!

I love this story. Can't wait to read more of your work. Could you please write this story from Tripp's point of view or do a continuation of it with Kira and Tripp having kids please?😊

Wonderful

An amazing and beautiful story. So wonderfully written.
You cared about the characters. I actually wanted Tripp to beat the scumbag willy to pulp!
Thank you so much.

An excellent read

U seemed very intune with the characters. From a country boy stand point I feel Tripp's pain & guilt. Please continue this series

Danke!😁

Thank you for this diverting story!