The Lady and the Cowboy Ch. 08

omg

finally! i have been waiting for sooo long lol, i have been checking and rechecking,

Joy

I really liked this velvet story: A bit harsh when stroked the wrong way but oh so soft in the other direction.

First Submission

You did a really fine job on your first submission; congratulations.

You did a really fine job on your first submission; congratulations.

*****

I seldom read stories in Romance, but something caught my eye about this one, and I'm glad it did. As I've said before, MissKris14, you are an extremely talented writer, and I think you have a bright future ahead of you should you choose to make it your profession.

aww that left me all misty eye and happy...

Wonderful first submission you deserve all the stars and praise because this was romance at its best and the ending couldn't have been anymore perfect. You area talented and gifted writer and hopefully you will continue to explore your talent! Wonderful job and wonderful characters

Oh, wow!

That was beautiful. And I'm a huge cynic. But hell, sign me up for the next summer at the ranch, as long as they grow them like Tripp... You did a fantastic job with this and I am seriously in awe. Keep it up and you'll have a confirmed fan here!

Awwwwwwww

I am really not a "cowboy" story fan, tend to avoid the whole thing, however, I am really glad I read the first chapter and then subsequently got hooked on your writing. Very, very, very well done, this story has all the right stuff, and a very happy and satisfying ending that leaves the reader smiling - albeit looking like an idiot to her fiance because she is smiling broadly at a computer screen - but smiling none the less!
Well done, and look forward to more! xx

Beautiful...

Enough said.

Ditto

In agreement with every single comment on this story. Well worth the wait and just beautiful...enough said.

*Sigh*

I have thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Just beautiful :)

Stunning!

This story was stunning from start to finish. It's one of the most beautifully written pieces I have ever read and it touched me in ways I never thought a story about a cowboy, of all things, ever could LOL!

You are so amazingly talented I can even begin to put it into words. This has been a true joy to read from start to finish. You capture emotions so easily. They feel so real, your characters alive and intense.

I can't praise this story or your talent enough. It is perfection from start to finish!


Don't ever stop writing. I can't wait for the next enthralling story from you.

Jaz
xxx

Wonderful!

Wonderful story! Can't wait to read others you will write :)

Wonderful

Very wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

A Great Start!!

If this is an example of what's to come then get your butt in gear Girl - we need more!!

nice story... :)

can't wait to read more. :) congratulations on your first story. :)

Did it have to end!

I cant believe its over, i really enjoyed this story and cant wait to read more from you, incrediable for your first story you should be really proud of yourself!! Bring on more and the quicker the better
Max

This story was so lovely

I can't believe it was your first attempt- I enjoyed every chapter. Mostly, I look forward to your next story! Congratulations!

WOW!

I'm at a loss for words.....

WOW!!

Wonderful story!

I just loved it! ou wrote it beautifully. Thank you so much.

Pass me another kleenex

This last Chapter had me tearing more than the others. This has been a great story. I can't wait for your next!

The whole story

I can't believe it was your first attempt- I enjoyed every chapter.
I look forward to your next story!
Hope we dont have to wait too long for your next story.
Thanks and Congratulations!

Great ending

And I do love my happy endings. :) Congratulations on a great first effort; hope you keep writing.

Good Ending

Thanks for a great story. I love a happy ending. I like that Kira went back to school and Trip got an apartment just to be near her. I love how she didn't pack up her life and move to be with him right away. I hope that you keep posting on this site.

Well done!

Well worth the wait! I enjoyed each posting and I definitely look forward to more! Tripp is my kind of guy...

Perfect!

This final chapters has been worth the wait. I am glad that Kira didn't give up college and instead they altered plans to make it work. And well who doesn't like a happy ending? And this ending was simply perfect, just like the entire story. Excellent first story and hope to read more!

Truly beautiful!

You are so incredibly talented and I hope you continue writing! Im glad that Tripp and Kira had a realistic happy ending but Im sad its the last chapter. Ive been reading on this site for a long time but Ive never actively sought out a story or author until now, and Ive never gotten teary and anxious over one either! Congrats and best of luck to you.

more please!

I need more Tripp and Kira please!! Id love to see where the rest of their lives take them. . . .sigh. . .
You really have a gift for conveying emotions, pulling people in and making them feel exactly what you want them to feel. Beautifully done. Keep writing!

I love it!

I love this story! I'm thrilled that Kira and Tripp got their happy ending and Kira finished school, especially a year early. I think it's wonderful that their relationship pushed them each to be better rather than to give something up. I'm looking forward to reading more of your writing!

GREAT STORY

Looking forward to more of your writings in the near future

Bravo!

You did an excellent job. From beginning to end you kept me coming back for more. Bravo! Wonderful!
What's next? ; )

Sigh...

If this is your first submission,I can only wait with eager anticipation at what is to come! This was beautifully written and I would love to see where life takes them and to see where it takes your writing! Excellent job!

i'm a sad bunny, the story is over. couldn't he have had some brothers? more cowboys to be caught.

Excellent!!!!

I must thank Jaz for tweeting this as a must read...... Loved it from start to finish and that Bar Scene woooooweeee.... I am deff adding you to my fav list!

I couldn't have asked for everything to work out better! :) I really enjoyed this story. It was very touching and packed with emotional dilemmas. You really brought your characters to life and made them very believable. I will be looking for more from you, and hopefully there will be plenty to follow. You have done very well, and I'm super impressed. Thanks for writing!

Captivating...

That is the only word that comes to mind after finishing this story...from beginning to end. Can't believe you made this old warrior cry!
Miss Kris you have a amazing talent, truely a gift for conveying emotions...no thats not right...for translating emotions into the written word. Thank you...and never stop writing.

I was hooked from the first word to the last! I look forward to reading more of your amazing work!

Sorry

I'm sorry I could only give you five stars on this, I think you deserve more.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

I love it. i take any negativity that i ever said--though i odn't htink it was really negative but anyways, in case i did.....I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it.

Aww

Love this story, thanks so much for writing so well

Beautiful

Oh my god! The last chapter was so beautiful...I'm so glad they got back together :) If I could I would give you a 100 gold stars for it!!! Keep writing honey!!!! It's brilliant!!!

Wonderful!

This story was absolutely magical :) These two well deserved each other! Your writing is amazing and I hope you continue to do so! Can't wait to read more of your work!

Excellent!

Well done on completing an excellent first story - truly magical!
I hope you decide to continue - I will be looking out with interest to see where you next take our fantasies.
Sue x

How nice

How nice to read a story from someone who pays their readers the compliment of proof-reading their contribution before submitting it, and also who remembers the rules of punctuation, spelling and English grammar they were taught in school.
As every one of your public commentators say, this is a great first story. Over here in the UK we have the Mills and Boon publishers (do they have them also in the US?) and I bet they would just love to publish this story. And maybe the next one that everyone is demanding. Go for it girl - quit the day job and start writing for a living!

Amazing

I literally have goosebumps. A truly touching story. Masterfully written.

So well done!

It was a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it very much. (I won't gush too much). The characters were so well matched and… real!

What also showed through was the absence of the unfortunately commonplace grammatical errors.

You obviously have a gift. Use it well, and often, please. Our world needs more of this.

Thanks!
Jamie

Incredible!

I can't believe that's your first story! I loved every chapter. Great plot, characters, descriptions, etc. It was romantic, sweet and sexy at the same time. I hope you write more in the near future. You're a great author.

I'm in love

with this story, you did a wonderful job! It was so sexy and romantic and I felt like I was there, you are masterful at the art of storytelling

WOW!!

It was like a fantasy come true! I was hooked from start to finish! Absolutely loved it and you should be so happy with that as a first story because it was absolutely amazing!

Loved it

Thank you for a fabulous story, read it all, could not stop. Great writing, please write another. Loved it!!!!!