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by Anonymous

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by Phxray5410/17/10

An Epic...

Thank you! It was well worth a few hours on a Sunday. Quite an enjoyable "tail".

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by Anonymous10/17/10

epic !

just epic

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by thornapple10/24/10

Oops

My apologies to all. I submitted my unedited version. Very clumsy and embarrassing.

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by Anonymous09/25/15

Re: Oops...

Great story, original and very imaginative. I'm glad you added the 'Oops' comment, though; it explains the meltdown in names, etc at about Ch 17-18, as well as some confusing dialogue interchanges that could have easily been sorted out by adding some 'he said, she said' phrasing.

Overall, a good read, thanks for all the hard work; you show a very good insight into human emotions as they apply to situations detailed in the story. It leads me to wonder how much of 'Roscoe's Tale' might have been autobiographical!

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