A Vampire in the Mirror

Very interesting idea...

....thank-you for writing.

Fine story

The story is well done, both technically and in story-line. I like more eroticism than offered here, but this entry was fun, too. Thanks!

Different...

Oh this was different and the revenge was sweeet! This is the second story I've read tonight in this contest that addresses the comeuppance of bullies and users and abusers. Woohoo! The sexual undertones worked nicely, although an after-the-bite-into-the-mirror sequel would be appreciated :) Goodluck!

~Luna

Thank you all...

...for the comments! Much appreciated.

Very Good

Different and well written. Hope to see more

I liked it....but I'd like to see more. Why was the mirror cold? Anyhow, I'd like more of their story. Where are they and what kind of life can they have on the other side of the mirror?

Interesting

Nice story -- I think this shows potential for both the story and you as the writer. I like the vampire in the mirror, nice twist on the no reflection myth.

oh my ...

I'm not usually one for vampire stories, but this was wonderful. thanks