This was a very nice story. I'm glad they finally got together.
I'm glad you wrote it.
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Anonymous10/18/10
wow
what a shock. you can write a really good story ! give a bit more effort (short and years gone by with no explanation)compared to your other lengthy stories and then you can forget what you wrote before. this one had it all in it. passion , love , sex and high emotions but as I said just a bit short. but good.
I've not read any of your stuff so I have no idea what your stories are generally like, but I have to admit I loved this one. It's grown up, moving, sweet. Just a good all around story. I can sympathize with his inability to get back with her, or move on. But sometimes you have to decide if moving on is worth letting go of a legitimate hurt. He did what he had to do. If you can't let somebody go after six years, you're gone.
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Anonymous10/19/10
good story
Good story, although I personally feel a paragraph is missing at the end. It ends a bit too abruptly.
And three weeks after we returned from our honeymoon, Don dropped in and took her out for a little reminiscing... Jen was nice enough to let me have sloppy seconds later, after Don left. We are SO HAPPY...
How is Dennis any better than other guys who knock up a girl and bolt.
Jennifer keeps her child a secret from till she needs him.
According to the timeline, Dennis bolted 10 years ago. He reconciles with Jennifer 3 1/2 years ago. Why did it take him so long to get married.
Also Jennifer says 6 1/2 years after the breakup that she hadn't had sex for 3 years. So, if she was screwing around for 3 1/2 years after the breakup, why did she suddenly stop?
Little inconsistencies like these spoil an otherwise passable piece of fluff.
unless you dont know and then its possible. TK U MLJ LV NV
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Anonymous08/12/15
What a Bitch
She's caught bragging about cheating at a party then keeps the guys daughter a secret for years. WTF.
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Anonymous09/11/15
One of the worst lines ever
"You have to earn that right. Right now you just happen to be the sperm donor from the past."
And your the deceptive cunt that kept him from his daughter. He should sue for custody, anyone this sick in the head shouldn't be a parent.
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Anonymous12/16/15
what was her excuse
I liked it. There is a but! I can't believe how much she did wrong to this man. It hurts to read this story! If it's shock and awe. Yes you've done that. Please write another sequel please explaining why she said and done hiding from him his own daughter, also why she said and did what she said at that party(if that makes sense) love you all! Bye. Greg
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Anonymous01/11/16
more than likely
she screwed the same guy she cheated with three years before the reconciliation. once a cheater..... she could have let him know a 1000 ways he had a daughter
False Pride like false ego makes foolish people
here we have to people too full of pride to be honest with themselves and each other.
He could have at least listened to a phone call
She could have written a letter
English
A heartwarming love story
Thank you.
Please write more like this, only longer if possible.
Awww!
This was a very nice story. I'm glad they finally got together.
I'm glad you wrote it.
wow
what a shock. you can write a really good story ! give a bit more effort (short and years gone by with no explanation)compared to your other lengthy stories and then you can forget what you wrote before. this one had it all in it. passion , love , sex and high emotions but as I said just a bit short. but good.
Loved it!
I've not read any of your stuff so I have no idea what your stories are generally like, but I have to admit I loved this one. It's grown up, moving, sweet. Just a good all around story. I can sympathize with his inability to get back with her, or move on. But sometimes you have to decide if moving on is worth letting go of a legitimate hurt. He did what he had to do. If you can't let somebody go after six years, you're gone.
good story
Good story, although I personally feel a paragraph is missing at the end. It ends a bit too abruptly.
Oh Brother.
And three weeks after we returned from our honeymoon, Don dropped in and took her out for a little reminiscing... Jen was nice enough to let me have sloppy seconds later, after Don left. We are SO HAPPY...
No Better
How is Dennis any better than other guys who knock up a girl and bolt.
Jennifer keeps her child a secret from till she needs him.
According to the timeline, Dennis bolted 10 years ago. He reconciles with Jennifer 3 1/2 years ago. Why did it take him so long to get married.
Also Jennifer says 6 1/2 years after the breakup that she hadn't had sex for 3 years. So, if she was screwing around for 3 1/2 years after the breakup, why did she suddenly stop?
Little inconsistencies like these spoil an otherwise passable piece of fluff.
IT NEVER IS
unless you dont know and then its possible. TK U MLJ LV NV
What a Bitch
She's caught bragging about cheating at a party then keeps the guys daughter a secret for years. WTF.
One of the worst lines ever
"You have to earn that right. Right now you just happen to be the sperm donor from the past."
And your the deceptive cunt that kept him from his daughter. He should sue for custody, anyone this sick in the head shouldn't be a parent.
what was her excuse
I liked it. There is a but! I can't believe how much she did wrong to this man. It hurts to read this story! If it's shock and awe. Yes you've done that. Please write another sequel please explaining why she said and done hiding from him his own daughter, also why she said and did what she said at that party(if that makes sense) love you all! Bye. Greg
more than likely
she screwed the same guy she cheated with three years before the reconciliation. once a cheater..... she could have let him know a 1000 ways he had a daughter
False Pride
False Pride like false ego makes foolish people
here we have to people too full of pride to be honest with themselves and each other.
He could have at least listened to a phone call
She could have written a letter
I would help my daughter
BUT pass on the cheating SLUT!
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