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by Anonymous

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by MizT10/19/10

Good

I wished it were a little longer, but otherwise it was a cute little tail or rather tale

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by Kamattlock10/19/10

Nice

That was a nice little short story I too wish there was more to it.

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by Anonymous10/20/10

Very Nice

Also would like it to be a little longer. I would be interested to see if you could creatively invent how he could actually have sex with her as a mermaid. Also, change up the words to describe his penis (member, manhood, cock, etc).

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by disableddan09/14/13

A good beginning,

Although it is a bit abrupt. I hope you'll add a few chapters to this, as it is open to multiple avenues.

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