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Then The Doorbell Rang

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by daddygoesdeep10/20/10

Theres more I hope

The first part was pretty damn hot. I do hope you finish, maybe with the door partner?

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by Anonymous10/21/10

Freaking Hot

OMG, I just loved the passion and erotic tension of this story. I can so relate to this story!!! I felt like I was her when I find time alone to pleasure myself. I really hope there will be more to this story and she finds that explosive release she needs. Just as I did after I finished reading this story.

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by THELOVELY1GLO03/08/11

Cute

So well written...

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by Anonymous03/24/13

So moist, so wet

I'm so glad my husband is not home this week so I could really enjoy this story. It made me so hot, so moist, and so wet I just had to play along as I read. I can't wait to read part 2!

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