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A Graduation Present Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Firmhands510/21/10

Well, hopefully soon - lol - great story

Please continue - an have some twists so it won't be predictable!!

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by Anonymous10/22/10

Yo! You have to continue!

How can you leave this cliff hanger? Your chapters are too short.

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by Anonymous10/26/10

Sweet serenity

A fresh look at the different sides of new relationships. I like how you've brought out the insecurities that are so raw and nerve wracking at the beginning of a relationship. It would have been great to read Jackson's take for the first 3 weeks but still it's a great build up for what's to come.

Thanks!

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by KayOwen10/26/10

Chapter 3.5

Chapter 3.5 with Jackson's experience will be posted shortly. And much more to come!

xo - ko

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by ILmonamour12/19/10

Cute

I like where this is going, your style makes it easy to imagine and anticipate what could happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous12/23/10

ahhhhhh continue soon dont just leave us hanging!

yep my title pretty much says it all

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by devilishdaisy8602/20/11

Please continue!

Please finish this story! I'm addicted and I want to know what happens!

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by Anonymous10/30/11

noo!!!!!

you need to finish this story!! i love it so much, you cant just leave us hanging. please finish it soon!!

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by Anonymous03/08/12

Please finish!!!!

Would love to see more of these characters...

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by Anonymous10/01/12

Great unfinished work!

Please KayOwen, may we have some more?

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by Anonymous12/29/12

More??! Please ?!?

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by Anonymous05/19/13

More please!!

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by Geodracula11/18/13

I definitely want to read more!

This is a great story so far, everyone can relate to it one way or another! Please give us more?

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by VanillaJade0902/01/14

Amazing!

Thank you so much for writing this series. You are an amazing writer! The characters are beautifully developed, the plot is compelling, and the writing style is sensitive enough to evoke strong feeling but never crosses into sappy. You are very talented and I hope that someday you will have time to finish this story.

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by Anonymous07/07/14

Most perfect story

This story is gorgeous and filled with a sexual class that most stories don't have. It's very detailed and so elegantly charming. I simply adore it, please please finish soon. It really is perfect and I'd love to hear how Andie charms Jackson into sex for the first time!

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by Anonymous10/17/14

Wonderful

more please!

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by Hayla8611/27/14

so.....where is the rest?! I was actually looking forward for them to 'ya know'...lol

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by Anonymous01/23/16

Great story so far

Where is the rest of it?

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