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LOrd of VEgas Ch. 13

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by Anonymous10/25/10

sorry to see it end :(

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by Anonymous10/26/10

Good story marred by mistakes!

Dear Mr. Stevens,

You have a good imagination and have put together an interesting and amusing tale, for which I thank you. You do, however, need to send your editor back to school. The grammatical errors in the text were appalling and it is an editor's job to ensure that such mistakes are corrected before publication. This is not a 'job application' as I have enough editing work to keep me busy!

Soryy Mr. or Miss Luvtaread but you must try harder. Your author deserves better from you.

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