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inyotef returns! i hope you can return to lara's adventures next :) great story.
Very nice! Great to see more Dark Angel stories! Can't wait for more. 5/5
A story? A chapter? A scene?
Why do you break this up into such small pieces. Is that just to make it look like you are posting new stories?
It's not even a chapter.
Goodness, imagine if a real book was written like this.
Why not get it down to just each sentence.
here's to Inyotef's Dark Angel!
I mean it, between you and Supman I don't know who does this better, at least you're still writting. I read your chyoo stuff too; outstanding. Oh and adding the Eyes Only hack, dude you rock!
Victor says: =P
Who the fuck the anonymous on 12/07/10 thinks he is.. geez.
I didn't read it yet but I'll do it soon.
a little short but from your storylist it seems to be a nice little intro into a much larger Dark Angel series. You have Max's character down pretty well, and introduced her heat in good way. second sex scene was hot.
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