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Naked Till You Make It

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by Anonymous10/23/10

Some awkward metaphors in there. Her tongue was surrounded by lips and a mouth? Her nipples were shaped like a 3/4 inch nut? And the instructor had rectangles for breasts? I am picturing people with mouths within mouths, breasts out of a Picasso with nipples from an Ace Hardware Store. Oh, and Mary Magdalene was never pregnant with Jesus, though some speculate she might have been pregnant by Jesus. Interesting concept for a story, weirdly executed. Keep trying.

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